Yes I like it! It's lovely. And I can almost see her let go of the edges from which she's hanging, with all that will happen afterwards... Great job!
I don't like...
I love it! As I already said on DA it has an interesting and well done angle, and as Illoh said, You know she's gonna fall!
Cosqui, i love it, thats a very good one and she couldn't be in a more desperat situation
A few years back, I wrote some stories that I think would fit well in this thread. The comments were favorable. Please check them out.
http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=2939
http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=2967
http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=3077