Should I Release this clip 1?

[The Edge]

Hi Tickle friends,

Last January I shot my first tickling video. I have been sitting on it for about 6 months unsure whether it is worth releasing and whether I am able to produce good enough material or not. I have had a tickling fetish since i was child and been looking at the TMF for 8 years.. Anyway here is a sample. Let me know if you would like to see the full thing. Before I produce more I want you guys to tell me all the good and bad points about this one. All ideas and constructive criticism is welcome! (Look out for another sample clip coming out soon.)

In this clip HOT Russian Beauty Vassanta is tickle tortured out of her mind.

Best,

 

[Fat Bastard]

If only she was as ticklish as she is beautiful …

 

[Deleted member 2452]

everything was good, except

the girls reactions. lame at best.
try again with a different lady.

steve

 

[jmsdarke]

Your lighting is good and the camera seems to focus on the areas of action. The foot tickling seemed to have more energy than the upper body action, but that may simply be due to the model's responsiveness combined with the areas you tickled on her upper body and your specific tickle technique.

It was also good that you had a little setup with her on the phone so we could first connect with her as a person before we see her as a ticklee.

My personal opinion is go for it.

Also, though I'd seek the opinion of the TMFers, I'd also advise you that many people who share their opinion will not spend a dime and may be fiercely committed to their specific flavor of tickle videos. So the trick is to listen for valuable insight very carefully.

Your start is better than many. The fact that you question the value of what you produce, with the intent to only produce great work is a quality you must never lose.

Welcome,

JD

 

[Comfort Eagle]

I liked it.

 

[Alan1958]

She is Gorgeous. How about trying to do an f/f with her as the ler? Anyway, I think you should release because it is good enough for a lot of people to enjoy. 🙂

 

[StoneColdTruth]

I don't think you should release this and shouldn't attempt to produce. There's already a lot of great material out there as it is. Leave it to those who trully know what they are doing.

 

[tommee]

Looks to me like you have the right equipment and the model was as good as many I've seen around here. I do buy clips but wouldn't by this one because it doesn't fit my personal tastes but that is no reason not to sell it as we all have different tastes. I disagree with the statement that there is plenty of good material. There will always be room for more and I saw nothing in this clip that suggested you don't know what you are doing. I say carry on and thanks for the clip preview.

 

[mustang]

Suggestion

Pretty feet with great potential. How about this for a turn on...do a POV clip of her soles with slow, but deliberate tickling (fingers, toothbrush, etc.) which shows her toes curling back, spreading apart, wriggling, etc. in response to the tickling. That should satiate the horniest of foot/tickle fetishists.

 

[tku]

Release it? Sure, can't hurt ...but I wouldn't pay for it personally!

You have shot some good quality, well lit footage from a range of nice angles and it seems you have the ability to stitch it together into a solid clip - there's no reason why you couldn't be a successful producer. What's lacking here is a model who is ticklish! Although this girl may be beautiful, unless you wanted to make a foot fetish video with her, I'd have turned her away after a quick tickle test/audition.

In short, you have the tools to succeed, but must put casting as a priority if you are to build a reputation that will earn you a following 🙂

I wish you luck!

 

[Darkknight]

Your lighting is good and the camera seems to focus on the areas of action. The foot tickling seemed to have more energy than the upper body action, but that may simply be due to the model's responsiveness combined with the areas you tickled on her upper body and your specific tickle technique.

It was also good that you had a little setup with her on the phone so we could first connect with her as a person before we see her as a ticklee.

My personal opinion is go for it.

Also, though I'd seek the opinion of the TMFers, I'd also advise you that many people who share their opinion will not spend a dime and may be fiercely committed to their specific flavor of tickle videos. So the trick is to listen for valuable insight very carefully.

Your start is better than many. The fact that you question the value of what you produce, with the intent to only produce great work is a quality you must never lose.

Welcome,

JD

I agree with JD, he knows his stuff. I can't buy every clip and some ticklees really hit certain people and it goes hot with sales. Go with your guts, if you felt this girl was really fun to tickle, then sell them.

Not everyone likes everything, I'm always dueling with those crazy Nylon fans. 🙂

Good luck, your model is beautiful but not as ticklish as I was hoping. Oh when you tickle the feet like you did, having the camera angled to see her facial reactions to that feet tickle is always a perk I go nuts for.

If I had a dime for all the clips I've bought from all our awesome producers, I could start my own tickle company!

DK

 

[Cantickles]

She has very sexy armpits

 

[MTJpub]

Your lighting is good and the camera seems to focus on the areas of action. The foot tickling seemed to have more energy than the upper body action, but that may simply be due to the model's responsiveness combined with the areas you tickled on her upper body and your specific tickle technique.

It was also good that you had a little setup with her on the phone so we could first connect with her as a person before we see her as a ticklee.

My personal opinion is go for it.

Also, though I'd seek the opinion of the TMFers, I'd also advise you that many people who share their opinion will not spend a dime and may be fiercely committed to their specific flavor of tickle videos. So the trick is to listen for valuable insight very carefully.

Your start is better than many. The fact that you question the value of what you produce, with the intent to only produce great work is a quality you must never lose.

Welcome,

JD

Outstanding advice!

Jim
MTJpub.com

 

[Fantastickle]

Good points

- Bondage was excellent nice and tight so she couldnt thrash around too much and cover up. All tickle parts fully exposed and vulnerable.

- Video quality was good and camera most of the time in good spot

- Tickle technique was good. You did fast and intence spider finger tickling and didnt stop.

- Just straight getting down to tickling with no talking


Bad Points

- Model was not really that ticklish. From "what I have observed" A lot of people would pick an less attractive model who is insamely ticklish over a drop dead gorgeous one who really isn't

- parts of the video had either her facial reaction or the body part being tickled but not at the same time. Again "from what I have observed" most people would prefer to see the body part being tickled and the facial expresion at the same time.

- you didn't switch it up like say using a brush to tickle or electric toothbrush when the fingers didn't quite get the best reaction.


The biggest thing though was the ticklishness of the model. If you did the exact same clip with a really ticklish model it would have looked really good. I have seen worse videos then this. So just test the model before hand and that should do it.

 

[john_q]

I don't think you should release this and shouldn't attempt to produce. There's already a lot of great material out there as it is. Leave it to those who trully know what they are doing.

Theres not that many good companys out there and if there was the more the better. You can never have to much.

Btw i say release it, she has really nice feet

 

[The Edge]

I appreciate the feedback. Keep them coming! Thanks for the good vibes guys!
It has really given me a lot to think about. I think the main points are the ticklishness of the model and also the choice to see the face with the tickling. I will endeavour to rectify these and then see what you think.

 

[trepak]

Nothing new here. I think you're up for a pretty good start. Everything's fine except for the model. She just sucks.
Get this one point right and you're in business!

 

[The Edge]

Please look at this thread for an unreleased clip of a different model: 🙂
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=180146

 

[LD_Tickler]

I really liked it! I found her sufficiently ticklish, hot, and full of protest

 

[The Edge]

Thanks LD!

 

[onomonopeia]

I think overall its an okay clip. As others have said, doesn't seem that ticklish. Seems to be like the kind of girl who needs to really be strapped down and tickled before her true laughter will come out. Beautiful girl though... And mad kudo's if you do one topless 😉.

 

[trace1984]

decent

 

[knudus]

....the camera seems to focus on the areas of action.

- pleeease producers: just give us good, clear HD pictures and let us do the focusing on what we want to see!

To be honest I would have dispaointed if I had bought the clip - but that happens and you can't please anybody so I would say: release it! However I do suggest you do not release untill you have some other clips with more ticklish models when you launch your studio.

Also writing something something like - this girl is very pretty but not our most ticklish model - will give you give a lot of credit!

I do like that you spend time to set up a little story and give us a chance to look at the model before she is tied up.

Best of luck !!

 

[The Edge]

@onomonopeia. I will definitely love to do topless one day

@knudus. I will definitely think more about the backstory in future and agree it would be be better to say 'moderately ticklish'. 🙂

 

[dj_hisp]

Good clip. Hot girl. Good angles. Good light. Good Bondage. I say release this!!