something old, something new.....

[Relent<]

As I one evening was looking through some of my older un-posted work, I realized that some of them weren't all bad; so I decided to show them to you all for the helluvit ^_^.
So, without further adieu.......
1) Something Old: Tommi is a character I came up with a few years ago whom is just another cat girl, I guess, but I like her. She and the entire concept surrounding her is based on "Tom & Jerry", though the Jerry character isn't present in this piece. Instead is a canary girl named Duk that has found herself in Tommi's clutches....

2) Something New: This is a more recent pic I drew (REALLY recent, as in last week) with the same ler, but this time with her beloved mouse character, Gerard(Jerry for short). I inked this one pretty well ^_^

3) Something Borrowed: though it could also be considered "something new",but to verify; a while ago in one of the many f/m picture threads, I saw a pic of a man (presumably Eminem) in a straight jacket being tickled. It was an "alright" pic, but alas it was m/m (+ the face was kind of "off" in my opinion), but I loved the concept so much, I applied it to this pic of Brent and the infamous barefoot nurses. For a short back story:
Brent had been becoming increasingly suspicious of this therapy, and confronted his nurse on it. She assured Brent that he must be suffering from paranoia, perhaps a side-affect of his medication (though he wasn't on anything) and so, to cover her ass, she schedueled him a short stay in the psych ward to help with his attitude....

4)Something Blue: though also classified as "something old", I say blue because she's an Atlantian (blue skin, fish girl I guess). She's mostly a daydream character withput much of a story, but I liked her and thought you all might as well.

Edit: sorry, file uploads are getting all wierd. I'll try again in a bit.
well, this concludes my post. If you are going to critique (I assure you I don't mind) please critique the newer ones, as the old ones I have long since known their flaws.

 

[Relent<]

2nd time around....

ok. had to use the url ver., which meant I had to upload the images to photobucket first. Here they are now though, hope they work for everyone.

 

[The Bandito]

Allo.

I think you should bust out your sketch book more often, if this is the result of you posting work just for the helluvit 😉

I can definitely tell the 2 and 3 are newer work, you can see the progression in the style. Artistically number 3 (straight Jacket guy) is my fave. I like the clean locks of his hair (versus the more "one strand at a time" look on some of the other pics). I like his facial expression the best, and the inking seems nics and clean.

The cat girl is definitely a very cool idea - I like the predatory aspect of both of her pics. Ah... to be a cat girl. LOL.

My personal fave is actually the 4th pic, even though artistically its not as refined. I like the pose, the sexual aspect of the tickling, the daydream angle, and the whole idea, in general. Plus, I tend to prefer */F tickling, though I have no probs with */M tickling.

The entire set is a lot of fun though.

The only bit of constructive feedback that I can offer is more of a style/preference comment. That being - sometimes your characters seem so skinny they look almost unwell. Like Straight Jacket Guy, his feet are filled out, and look great - but his arms and shoulders look a bit like skin on bone. I personally would love to see them all a little meatier. Not huge, or buff, or anything - that wouldn't fit your style. But maybe a bit more filled out. But like I mentioned - I think that is purely a stylistic difference. If you prefer them this way - then go for it. More power to ya!!!

Thanks for posting these 😉

B

 

[SF85]

Great pics Relent. Though, I'll have to agree with Bandito, the characters are on the painfully thin side...

 

[Johnny21]

Wow!

Those pics are nicely done!
I like your style!🙂

 

[Relent<]

well, I think I still have a ways to go artistically, and you all's feedback is definitely helping me in my progression. I've received this critique before, but I can't seem to bring "meat" to the appropriate areas. I'm working on it, though.