Stepen Doubt and The romance of Cere's Astaroth

[Journia]

Stepen Doubt and The romance of Ceres Astaroth

Yes... These two are characters in my story of Machiavelle....kind of familiar I suppose....yeah. Well, I will explain, Stephen is an angel who makes well with Machiavelle's sister. Ceres, and here she is. With him.

 

[Journia]

Whoops!!! Forgot the Picture. So...any thoughts?
Do post replies and critiques!!!!

 

[Journia]

Somebody? Anybody?

 

[Violetta]

Looks pretty cool so far. I like that stern expression on his face while he's sneaking a hand under her shirt. n_n But if he's an angel, where's his wings? 😉

 

[Journia]

He is a mad angel. Who falls from grace, if you read my book when it gets finished, you will see.

 

[Violetta]

There's gonna be a full book about this?

 

[Journia]

Yeah.
Have you not read my first chapter?

 

[Violetta]

Huh uh. I guess I missed the thread. Got a link handy? n_n;;

 

[Sockstickler]

http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=30339
Here it is. It's actually very well written, and definitely worth checking out.
As for the picture, I like it. It is kind of funny seeing such a stern expression with his hand snuck under her shirt. I definitely hope to see more of these two.

 

[Journia]

Danngg....I had a feeling that was going to happen...Thanks, you saved me a lot of moving and clicking. *Hugs and gives you a heiniken* I don't think I spelled heineken right... Thanbks!!1

 

[Violetta]

Wow! Yeah... Just that one chapter was freakishly good. I'm looking forward to more art and more literature. 😉

 

[Journia]

Wooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttt

 

[Violetta]

Btw... where would one go about purchasing a device like the one in that chapter? 😉

 

[Journia]

I would have to build it myself actually. I am getting ready to also.

 

[Violetta]

Really?! What are you using to build it?

 

[Journia]

Wooohoooooo

 

[Low_Roads]

Ah, now we see the proper Succubus technique for obtaining male attention! I hope Machiavelle is taking notes. Ceres is another good-looker (always a sucker for girls in glasses), though Stephen's a bit grim. As long as Cere's happy with him, that's all that counts!

 

[Journia]

Oh...she is very happy....extremely happy with a notorious fallen angel.
I am also a big sucker for girls in glasses. you aren't alone!!!

 

[Journia]

Any other replies for this?