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tell me what you think

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CaliGirl19

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well i posted my first 2 stories...lol...tell me what you think. i need feedback....
 
I think they're way too short. They're more like descriptions of fantasies than stories. Otherwise, they're clear and fun.
 
True stories

Another thing. True stories belong in the true stories forum. At least one of these sounded like a true story.
 
Write on Hayley! Write on!
Love,
Heather and Anna
P.S Lovely situation use! As for length... well fictional stories last about 2-5 pages! Or more!!!! Still lovely start to a fine young writer!
 
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