well i posted my first 2 stories...lol...tell me what you think. i need feedback....
C CaliGirl19 Registered User Joined Apr 12, 2006 Messages 12 Points 0 Apr 12, 2006 #1 well i posted my first 2 stories...lol...tell me what you think. i need feedback....
L LD_Tickler 4th Level Yellow Feather Joined Nov 23, 2005 Messages 3,750 Points 0 Apr 12, 2006 #2 I think they're way too short. They're more like descriptions of fantasies than stories. Otherwise, they're clear and fun.
I think they're way too short. They're more like descriptions of fantasies than stories. Otherwise, they're clear and fun.
H HoustonMaleLer Registered User Joined Oct 26, 2005 Messages 40 Points 0 Apr 12, 2006 #3 True stories Another thing. True stories belong in the true stories forum. At least one of these sounded like a true story.
True stories Another thing. True stories belong in the true stories forum. At least one of these sounded like a true story.
H Heather & Anna TMF Expert Joined Nov 17, 2005 Messages 417 Points 0 Apr 12, 2006 #4 Write on Hayley! Write on! Love, Heather and Anna P.S Lovely situation use! As for length... well fictional stories last about 2-5 pages! Or more!!!! Still lovely start to a fine young writer!
Write on Hayley! Write on! Love, Heather and Anna P.S Lovely situation use! As for length... well fictional stories last about 2-5 pages! Or more!!!! Still lovely start to a fine young writer!