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C cardplaya333 TMF Poster Joined Apr 20, 2005 Messages 120 Points 0 Apr 7, 2015 #1 Update Attachments s4Dr1em.jpg 50.7 KB · Views: 202 Last edited: Jun 4, 2018
S sandiegotickler TMF Regular Joined Oct 28, 2002 Messages 258 Points 18 Apr 7, 2015 #2 ..... Last edited: Mar 1, 2017
L lzamora TMF Expert Joined Feb 27, 2006 Messages 511 Points 0 Apr 7, 2015 #3 I like where this is going. However, be patient with it, don't try and rush it. I hope to see you progress with this story.
I like where this is going. However, be patient with it, don't try and rush it. I hope to see you progress with this story.
L lancashirelad1 TMF Expert Joined Feb 3, 2015 Messages 350 Points 0 Apr 8, 2015 #4 good beginning looking forward to the next bit
milagros317 Verified Joined Jan 12, 2002 Messages 579,490 Points 63 Apr 8, 2015 #5 A continuation would be most welcome.
R robmic Verified Joined Oct 19, 2001 Messages 7,919 Points 48 Apr 8, 2015 #6 I'm with the others.... please follow up!
A assassin33 TMF Master Joined Jan 26, 2010 Messages 635 Points 0 Apr 9, 2015 #7 Good story so far, and I can't wait for part 2.
A Axel flame TMF Regular Joined Sep 3, 2007 Messages 244 Points 18 Apr 9, 2015 #8 this needs a part 2 good job!