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SYNOPSIS: Alix tells the story of one of her past victims: a cartographer named Cory, who thinks he has stumbled into a fairytale when he finds a gorgeous naked woman bathing in a woodland stream. His accidental voyeurism is rewarded with a sharp lesson from the sprite – and his finacée Julianne is only too glad to lend a hand.
Hello all.
It's been a while, but I'm not done with this series yet. This one is almost entirely a flashback – so if you haven't read the previous installments, you can just ignore the intro and read this as a self-contained story.
Hope you enjoy.
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The Tickle Sprite, pt. 5: A Helping Hand
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Bethany lay stretched out on the sofa, head nestled in Alix's lap, giggling softly as slender fingers casually caressed her belly. "Tell me another story," she coaxed. "I bet I'm not the only girl you've lured into that glade of yours."
"Not by a long shot," Alix said. "Guys, too."
"Really?" Bethany looked up into her friend's eyes with eager interest.
"Oh, yes. Merchants, warriors, woodcutters, you name it. People get lost in that forest all the time. Not so much since they made the Path, of course, but I can still count on the occasional numbskull stepping over the warding stones. Like you did."
"I always thought the Path was ancient," Bethany said quickly, anxious to deflect attention from herself. "Like it was laid down by some extinct race."
"What? No, it was made about a hundred years ago. They wanted an easier trading route out of the valley, that's all. You know how fertile this area is; hordes of people came to settle here, and pretty soon they were growing enough crops to feed half a dozen colonies. But they couldn't export them without finding a safe way through the forest. At first they thought all they had to do was send in some cartographers to map it out, but that didn't work out so well."
"Why not?"
"Enchanted forests don't take kindly to mapmakers. They came prepared, of course – each one was paired up with a mercenary for protection, and they were loaded up with charms against every supernatural danger they could think of. But they didn't think of everything."
"Let me guess," said Bethany. "They weren't expecting tickle sprites."
"They were not," said Alix smugly. "You want a story? This is a good one..."
***
Cory jerked on the reins and brought his slow-stepping horse to a standstill. That silver elm with the forked trunk... He was certain he had seen that exact same tree not two hours earlier – only then it had stood beside a moss-covered boulder in the shape of a dragon's head. Now the boulder was nowhere to be seen, and there was a little rivulet winding through the roots that had definitely not been there before.
Was his imagination playing tricks on him, or was the forest really changing? Either way, he was completely lost. Cartographers were not supposed to get lost. And worst of all, he hadn't seen hide or hair of Julianne for over half an hour. She must have lagged behind for some reason, or maybe he had ridden too far ahead. And now he was alone.
His concern was more than for his own safety. Besides being his bodyguard, Julianne was also his fiancée. But after all, he told himself, she was a skilled huntress, perfectly capable of taking care of herself in a place like this. They'd probably meet up again any minute now.
He kicked his horse into motion and began following the flow of water upstream – and with all his senses on the alert, it wasn't long before he picked up a new sound up ahead. Somebody was singing.
For a moment his heart surged, but as he drew nearer his hopes were dashed. It was a female voice, but it wasn't Julianne's. Another lost traveller? Or one of the townsfolk, perhaps – someone who knew the hidden ways, someone who could help him. On the other hand, it might be bandits. He ought to get a closer look before he made his presence known.
He slipped out of the saddle and tied his nervously gamboling horse to a tree, then advanced carefully on foot. The musical voice was very close now, and accompanied by sounds of splashing. Cory positioned himself behind a broad oak and peered through a break in the screen of leaves.
His mouth fell open in astonishment at what he saw. Up ahead, two streams converged and fell into a rocky hollow, creating a shallow pool of clear water. A beautiful young woman, stark naked, was reclining on the rocks, luxuriously massaging her limbs, her dark hair soaked and her body sparkling with radiant droplets.
Cory stared, transfixed. He seemed to have stumbled onto a scene out of a fairytale – or out of one of his own fantasies. He felt the stirrings of arousal and told himself he ought to back away. This sight wasn't meant for him. But then again, a voice whispered in his head, this girl clearly didn't understand how dangerous the forest was. Maybe it was right that someone should watch over her.
Still singing softly to herself, the woman leaned forward and scooped up a double-handful of water, then tilted her head back and splashed her face, letting the exultant droplets fall to tracing lines along her breasts and midriff. Cory unconsciously shifted his position, carelessly rustling the undergrowth.
The woman looked up sharply. "Who's there?"
After a moment of painful indecision, Cory emerged out of hiding, making an effort to avert his gaze. "I don't mean you any harm, I... I'm lost. I heard your voice." He awkwardly unfastened his cloak and held it out to her. "Here, you shouldn't... Take this."
The girl had risen up to meet him, and now she took the cloak and wrapped it around herself, smiling at the novelty. "Thanks," she said, and turned to leave.
"Wait," said Cory. "I don't know who you are, but... Trust me, this forest is not somewhere you want to wander around n–... erm, dressed like that. I'm looking for a friend of mine; stick with me and we can... Hey, wait."
Paying him no heed, the girl was already wandering away, Cory's cloak flapping at her ankles. Forgetful of his horse, forgetful of the danger, Cory followed.
***
"You're so mean," laughed Bethany. "He was only trying to help you."
"He was a guy," said Alix. "He only had one thing on his mind."
"Cynic. So you led him into your enchanted glade. Then what?"
"What do you think? I tickled him."
"Oh, come on! Don't skip over the best part."
"I'm not," said Alix. "The best part is what happened when his girlfriend showed up."
CONTINUED BELOW
Hello all.
It's been a while, but I'm not done with this series yet. This one is almost entirely a flashback – so if you haven't read the previous installments, you can just ignore the intro and read this as a self-contained story.
Hope you enjoy.
=============================================
The Tickle Sprite, pt. 5: A Helping Hand
=============================================
Bethany lay stretched out on the sofa, head nestled in Alix's lap, giggling softly as slender fingers casually caressed her belly. "Tell me another story," she coaxed. "I bet I'm not the only girl you've lured into that glade of yours."
"Not by a long shot," Alix said. "Guys, too."
"Really?" Bethany looked up into her friend's eyes with eager interest.
"Oh, yes. Merchants, warriors, woodcutters, you name it. People get lost in that forest all the time. Not so much since they made the Path, of course, but I can still count on the occasional numbskull stepping over the warding stones. Like you did."
"I always thought the Path was ancient," Bethany said quickly, anxious to deflect attention from herself. "Like it was laid down by some extinct race."
"What? No, it was made about a hundred years ago. They wanted an easier trading route out of the valley, that's all. You know how fertile this area is; hordes of people came to settle here, and pretty soon they were growing enough crops to feed half a dozen colonies. But they couldn't export them without finding a safe way through the forest. At first they thought all they had to do was send in some cartographers to map it out, but that didn't work out so well."
"Why not?"
"Enchanted forests don't take kindly to mapmakers. They came prepared, of course – each one was paired up with a mercenary for protection, and they were loaded up with charms against every supernatural danger they could think of. But they didn't think of everything."
"Let me guess," said Bethany. "They weren't expecting tickle sprites."
"They were not," said Alix smugly. "You want a story? This is a good one..."
***
Cory jerked on the reins and brought his slow-stepping horse to a standstill. That silver elm with the forked trunk... He was certain he had seen that exact same tree not two hours earlier – only then it had stood beside a moss-covered boulder in the shape of a dragon's head. Now the boulder was nowhere to be seen, and there was a little rivulet winding through the roots that had definitely not been there before.
Was his imagination playing tricks on him, or was the forest really changing? Either way, he was completely lost. Cartographers were not supposed to get lost. And worst of all, he hadn't seen hide or hair of Julianne for over half an hour. She must have lagged behind for some reason, or maybe he had ridden too far ahead. And now he was alone.
His concern was more than for his own safety. Besides being his bodyguard, Julianne was also his fiancée. But after all, he told himself, she was a skilled huntress, perfectly capable of taking care of herself in a place like this. They'd probably meet up again any minute now.
He kicked his horse into motion and began following the flow of water upstream – and with all his senses on the alert, it wasn't long before he picked up a new sound up ahead. Somebody was singing.
For a moment his heart surged, but as he drew nearer his hopes were dashed. It was a female voice, but it wasn't Julianne's. Another lost traveller? Or one of the townsfolk, perhaps – someone who knew the hidden ways, someone who could help him. On the other hand, it might be bandits. He ought to get a closer look before he made his presence known.
He slipped out of the saddle and tied his nervously gamboling horse to a tree, then advanced carefully on foot. The musical voice was very close now, and accompanied by sounds of splashing. Cory positioned himself behind a broad oak and peered through a break in the screen of leaves.
His mouth fell open in astonishment at what he saw. Up ahead, two streams converged and fell into a rocky hollow, creating a shallow pool of clear water. A beautiful young woman, stark naked, was reclining on the rocks, luxuriously massaging her limbs, her dark hair soaked and her body sparkling with radiant droplets.
Cory stared, transfixed. He seemed to have stumbled onto a scene out of a fairytale – or out of one of his own fantasies. He felt the stirrings of arousal and told himself he ought to back away. This sight wasn't meant for him. But then again, a voice whispered in his head, this girl clearly didn't understand how dangerous the forest was. Maybe it was right that someone should watch over her.
Still singing softly to herself, the woman leaned forward and scooped up a double-handful of water, then tilted her head back and splashed her face, letting the exultant droplets fall to tracing lines along her breasts and midriff. Cory unconsciously shifted his position, carelessly rustling the undergrowth.
The woman looked up sharply. "Who's there?"
After a moment of painful indecision, Cory emerged out of hiding, making an effort to avert his gaze. "I don't mean you any harm, I... I'm lost. I heard your voice." He awkwardly unfastened his cloak and held it out to her. "Here, you shouldn't... Take this."
The girl had risen up to meet him, and now she took the cloak and wrapped it around herself, smiling at the novelty. "Thanks," she said, and turned to leave.
"Wait," said Cory. "I don't know who you are, but... Trust me, this forest is not somewhere you want to wander around n–... erm, dressed like that. I'm looking for a friend of mine; stick with me and we can... Hey, wait."
Paying him no heed, the girl was already wandering away, Cory's cloak flapping at her ankles. Forgetful of his horse, forgetful of the danger, Cory followed.
***
"You're so mean," laughed Bethany. "He was only trying to help you."
"He was a guy," said Alix. "He only had one thing on his mind."
"Cynic. So you led him into your enchanted glade. Then what?"
"What do you think? I tickled him."
"Oh, come on! Don't skip over the best part."
"I'm not," said Alix. "The best part is what happened when his girlfriend showed up."
CONTINUED BELOW




