the weakness of an Immortal start up

[roboscaro]

I'm going to start a series of stories about immortals and girls that are immortal and people wish to know how they became immortal by torturing them, and since they can't feel any real pain so they have to be tickled into telling them.

I'll explain new characters in each one of them I will do with pictures of anime girls I find on the internet.

Tell me what you think of this idea and tell me what you think of the first story I make and if you think it needs something give me advise on what you think.

 

[Comfort Eagle]

Sounds like a cool idea.