Barefoot_Sis
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I wrote this story a few years ago and had it on my AOL website. There were specific instructions that no one be allowed to copy it. As usual, the jekrs over at TMF ignore any rule they feel like, so I'm going to post this here, and claim due credit for it. I don't post any more stories because 1) I'm not very good yet, and 2) these are first drafts, and they suck, and 3) because once you post it on the internet, you lose all chances of selling First North American Serial rights.
Tori's Tree Tickle
by Ticklecat2
Heidi enjoyed hiking, it was as simple as that. Now that she was out of
college, it was a chance to put on her kelly green sweats, get away from
city life for a few hours and go deep into the woods, away from all her
problems and troubles. And so far, today's hike had been pretty terrific.
Taking a break to rest her weary feet, Heidi slipped out of her sneakers and
socks and let the grass tickle her bare soles, as she thought about the
various trees and bushes that she had seen today. Wriggling her toes, she
ran her fingers idly through her dirty blonde hair and she sighed happily as
she relaxed against the large oak tree.
Suddenly, there was a large whistling sound, and then the sounds of many
leaves tearing and branches breaking. Jumping to her feet, Heidi whirled
around and saw that a parachutist had come crashing down into one of the
large sycamores behind her.
Heidi sprinted over. "Hello? Are you all right?"
"Hi!" came back a friendly, high-pitched voice. "My name's Teri. I just
joined the local parachuting club. I wanted to prove to my friends that I
could do this with them, but I got separated and drifted off by myself."
There was a thrashing above, and some of the leaves parted. Heidi could just
make out a shapely brunette hanging above her, struggling to free herself
from her chute and come down.
Heidi looked up. "Are you ok?"
"I'm fine, no bumps or bruises, but all my ropes and lines and cords are
tangled everywhere. I'm totally stuck, can you help me down?"
Heidi went to tug on Teri's ankles, but saw that there were cords lashed
around each one, running in and out of several branches. "You've got some
lines around your legs."
"I know, I can feel them. I just tried yanking my feet up, but my boots keep
getting caught."
"Oh, I can help you. I'll yanks off your boots, and you can try yanking your
bare legs up."
"Ok, if you think that will help. Can't you just yank the lines off?"
Standing on her tip-toes, Heidi was able to unlace first the left boot and
then the right. "I can just barely reach your feet as it is, sorry!" She
quickly tugged off the first boot, but the second boot was on a little
tighter, and she ending up yanking off the sock as well, leaving that
dangling half on and half off Teri's foot.
"Ok, let me try to pull my legs up, now."
"Wait, let me just fix your sock."
But no sooner had Heidi touched Teri's bare sole, meaning only to slide the
sock up, when the bound brunette let out a surprized squeal.
Teri giggled once and kicked her foot, letting the sock drop to the ground. "Watch it, I have to warn you that I have very ticklish soles!"
"Oh? well, I guess I have to warn you that I have very long nails, see?" And
Heidi raked her nails up and down on Teri's exposed sole.
"That is so not funny! Hahahahahaha! No, really, cut it out!"
"Really? Cootchie cootchie coo!" Heidi slid her fingers back and forth
across the sole.
"Ahahahahaha! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Come on, really, I'm not kidding, I'm terribly
ticklish!"
Heidi laughed. "Wow, you really are!" She raked her fingers along the sides
of Teri's foot. "And you have such a great laugh, like a little schoolgirl!"
She ran her nails up and down Teri's foot, now sweeping around her arch and
insole.
"Stop! Stop! Ahahahahahah! HAHAHAHAhahahahaha! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"
Heidi laughed along with Teri, she had never known anyone so ticklish.
"Cootchie cootchie coo!" She tapped with her long nails on her toes.
"Please! Come on, cut it out! HAHAHAH ahaHAHAHAH AHahaha AHAHAHAHAH! This isn't funny, hahhahahaha!"
"I don't know, you're laughing pretty hard! Tickle Tickle!" And she wiggled
her hand again.
"Oh my god, that tickles so much! AhahahahahahahahA! Hahahahahahahahah!
Stop, stop, please stop, I mean it! Please!"
Heidi nodded. "Ok, ok, I'll stop. Here, I'll take off your other sock, and
you can slip your legs up out of the cords."
"Ok!" Teri was glad to stop giggling!
Heidi peeled off the other other sock, then glanced up at Teri's bare legs
and feet. "Ok, I can think you can land on that branch there to your left.
See if you can move now."
Teri looked dubious. "I don't know, that branch seems pretty far away."
Heidi reached up, and tickled both bare feet. "You can do it," she said
encouragingly. "Here's some motivation!"
"Heehahaha.. oh! hahahhah! Oh god, stop it, stop tickling me, hahahaha... no
no, not both feet at once, hahahahah. stop! stop! please!
HAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAH!"
Teri tried yanking on her bonds, seeing if she could slip her bare legs up
and away. For a moment, she was able to pull them up, as the branch below
her bent a bit. But then it snapped back, tightening the lines around her
ankles even more.
Below, Heidi watched as Teri tried bringing her legs up, then saw as her two
bare feet popped down through the canopy of leaves again. Idly, she reached
up and tickled them again. "No luck, huh?"
"Hahahahahah... oh, don't start tickling me again! Please! I'm still stuck,
worse than ever I think! Help me down, please!"
Heidi nodded, raking her nails along both soles. "Ok, hmmm... Maybe if I
keep tickling your feet, you'll laugh so hard you'll fall out of the tree?"
"What? Oh come on, no! No, please! HAhahahahahah! AHAHAHAHAH!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Oh my god, your nails tickle so much! HAHahhehehehehehe! hahahahah! Oh god, oh god, stop tickling my bare feet! hahahahahaha! Please, please, I'm too ticklish!"
"Cootchie cootcie coo!"
"Oh come on, hahahah! Don't leave me hanging barefoot and helpless!
Hahahahahaha! No no, not your nails again! hahAH AHAHAHAHAH! HAHAHAHAAAHAH! Oh my god, please! PLEASE! Hahahahahahahahahah!"
Heidi nodded, and stopped tickling. "Ok, sorry if I got carried away. How
about I if I try and climb up myself? Maybe I can help you down from the
other side or something."
She gave Teri's toes one last tickle, then gathered up her boots and socks
and put them back in the woods with her owns sneakers. "Here, I'm just
making sure our stuff is safe... I'll be right up! And she came back, gave
Teri's soles another tickle, then started climbing....
End of Part 1
Tori's Tree Tickle
by Ticklecat2
Heidi enjoyed hiking, it was as simple as that. Now that she was out of
college, it was a chance to put on her kelly green sweats, get away from
city life for a few hours and go deep into the woods, away from all her
problems and troubles. And so far, today's hike had been pretty terrific.
Taking a break to rest her weary feet, Heidi slipped out of her sneakers and
socks and let the grass tickle her bare soles, as she thought about the
various trees and bushes that she had seen today. Wriggling her toes, she
ran her fingers idly through her dirty blonde hair and she sighed happily as
she relaxed against the large oak tree.
Suddenly, there was a large whistling sound, and then the sounds of many
leaves tearing and branches breaking. Jumping to her feet, Heidi whirled
around and saw that a parachutist had come crashing down into one of the
large sycamores behind her.
Heidi sprinted over. "Hello? Are you all right?"
"Hi!" came back a friendly, high-pitched voice. "My name's Teri. I just
joined the local parachuting club. I wanted to prove to my friends that I
could do this with them, but I got separated and drifted off by myself."
There was a thrashing above, and some of the leaves parted. Heidi could just
make out a shapely brunette hanging above her, struggling to free herself
from her chute and come down.
Heidi looked up. "Are you ok?"
"I'm fine, no bumps or bruises, but all my ropes and lines and cords are
tangled everywhere. I'm totally stuck, can you help me down?"
Heidi went to tug on Teri's ankles, but saw that there were cords lashed
around each one, running in and out of several branches. "You've got some
lines around your legs."
"I know, I can feel them. I just tried yanking my feet up, but my boots keep
getting caught."
"Oh, I can help you. I'll yanks off your boots, and you can try yanking your
bare legs up."
"Ok, if you think that will help. Can't you just yank the lines off?"
Standing on her tip-toes, Heidi was able to unlace first the left boot and
then the right. "I can just barely reach your feet as it is, sorry!" She
quickly tugged off the first boot, but the second boot was on a little
tighter, and she ending up yanking off the sock as well, leaving that
dangling half on and half off Teri's foot.
"Ok, let me try to pull my legs up, now."
"Wait, let me just fix your sock."
But no sooner had Heidi touched Teri's bare sole, meaning only to slide the
sock up, when the bound brunette let out a surprized squeal.
Teri giggled once and kicked her foot, letting the sock drop to the ground. "Watch it, I have to warn you that I have very ticklish soles!"
"Oh? well, I guess I have to warn you that I have very long nails, see?" And
Heidi raked her nails up and down on Teri's exposed sole.
"That is so not funny! Hahahahahaha! No, really, cut it out!"
"Really? Cootchie cootchie coo!" Heidi slid her fingers back and forth
across the sole.
"Ahahahahaha! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Come on, really, I'm not kidding, I'm terribly
ticklish!"
Heidi laughed. "Wow, you really are!" She raked her fingers along the sides
of Teri's foot. "And you have such a great laugh, like a little schoolgirl!"
She ran her nails up and down Teri's foot, now sweeping around her arch and
insole.
"Stop! Stop! Ahahahahahah! HAHAHAHAhahahahaha! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"
Heidi laughed along with Teri, she had never known anyone so ticklish.
"Cootchie cootchie coo!" She tapped with her long nails on her toes.
"Please! Come on, cut it out! HAHAHAH ahaHAHAHAH AHahaha AHAHAHAHAH! This isn't funny, hahhahahaha!"
"I don't know, you're laughing pretty hard! Tickle Tickle!" And she wiggled
her hand again.
"Oh my god, that tickles so much! AhahahahahahahahA! Hahahahahahahahah!
Stop, stop, please stop, I mean it! Please!"
Heidi nodded. "Ok, ok, I'll stop. Here, I'll take off your other sock, and
you can slip your legs up out of the cords."
"Ok!" Teri was glad to stop giggling!
Heidi peeled off the other other sock, then glanced up at Teri's bare legs
and feet. "Ok, I can think you can land on that branch there to your left.
See if you can move now."
Teri looked dubious. "I don't know, that branch seems pretty far away."
Heidi reached up, and tickled both bare feet. "You can do it," she said
encouragingly. "Here's some motivation!"
"Heehahaha.. oh! hahahhah! Oh god, stop it, stop tickling me, hahahaha... no
no, not both feet at once, hahahahah. stop! stop! please!
HAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAH!"
Teri tried yanking on her bonds, seeing if she could slip her bare legs up
and away. For a moment, she was able to pull them up, as the branch below
her bent a bit. But then it snapped back, tightening the lines around her
ankles even more.
Below, Heidi watched as Teri tried bringing her legs up, then saw as her two
bare feet popped down through the canopy of leaves again. Idly, she reached
up and tickled them again. "No luck, huh?"
"Hahahahahah... oh, don't start tickling me again! Please! I'm still stuck,
worse than ever I think! Help me down, please!"
Heidi nodded, raking her nails along both soles. "Ok, hmmm... Maybe if I
keep tickling your feet, you'll laugh so hard you'll fall out of the tree?"
"What? Oh come on, no! No, please! HAhahahahahah! AHAHAHAHAH!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Oh my god, your nails tickle so much! HAHahhehehehehehe! hahahahah! Oh god, oh god, stop tickling my bare feet! hahahahahaha! Please, please, I'm too ticklish!"
"Cootchie cootcie coo!"
"Oh come on, hahahah! Don't leave me hanging barefoot and helpless!
Hahahahahaha! No no, not your nails again! hahAH AHAHAHAHAH! HAHAHAHAAAHAH! Oh my god, please! PLEASE! Hahahahahahahahahah!"
Heidi nodded, and stopped tickling. "Ok, sorry if I got carried away. How
about I if I try and climb up myself? Maybe I can help you down from the
other side or something."
She gave Teri's toes one last tickle, then gathered up her boots and socks
and put them back in the woods with her owns sneakers. "Here, I'm just
making sure our stuff is safe... I'll be right up! And she came back, gave
Teri's soles another tickle, then started climbing....
End of Part 1
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