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Valcinox FFFFM/FF ( Nudity, dark fiction, nonconsensual)

Barefootwarden

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Out of boredom, I crafted this little story. I hope you’ll enjoy it, and I warmly welcome any comments you may have


The Duchy of Valcinox—how proud it once stood, gleaming deep within the vast dominion of the Xavox Empire. Now, though, its halls echoed with a vacancy, for the old duke lay long in the grave, and only his two daughters remained to carry forth the line.

Iris, just nineteen, all golden hair and delicate manners, a creature who seemed spun from silk and candlelight. And Ana—twenty-three, with chestnut locks and a temper as steady as steel, the sort who would rather command an army than embroider a cushion. Between the two of them, they were poised to seize back the title of duchess, so rudely suspended since their father’s death.

Ana, ever ambitious, had already taken the reins of the troops. Each victory she stitched into her banner brought her closer to the ducal throne. But ah! The council of regents—the dreary, powdered gentlemen charged with “caretaking” the duchy in this interlude—saw her rising star as nothing but a threat. And what do such men do when power trembles in their hands? They scheme, of course.

Assassination? Too crude. Poison? Too obvious, and besides, poison has the unfortunate habit of splashing back upon the poisoner. No, something subtler was required. Enter one greasy-fingered priest, whose cassock smelled suspiciously of cheap wine and worse sins. With a sanctimonious smile, he whispered a delicious little venom: “What if, good sirs, the young ladies were found guilty of witchcraft? Not stabbed, not strangled—condemned by law and faith alike! Oh, the beauty of it: their downfall would look like righteousness itself.”

The councilors, men who could barely conjure a thought without help, found this suggestion dazzling. Witchcraft! The very word promised smoke, fire, and scandal—yet without a drop of blood staining their own hands. And so the plot, odious and wicked, began to coil itself around the unsuspecting sisters, like a serpent tightening before the strike.

the Duchy of Valcinox—how proud it once stood, gleaming deep within the vast dominion of the Xavox Empire. Now, though, its halls echoed with a vacancy, for the old duke lay long in the grave, and only his two daughters remained to carry forth the line.

Iris, just nineteen, all golden hair and delicate manners, a creature who seemed spun from silk and candlelight. And Ana—twenty-three, with chestnut locks and a temper as steady as steel, the sort who would rather command an army than embroider a cushion. Between the two of them, they were poised to seize back the title of duchess, so rudely suspended since their father’s death.

Ana, ever ambitious, had already taken the reins of the troops. Each victory she stitched into her banner brought her closer to the ducal throne. But ah! The council of regents—the dreary, powdered gentlemen charged with “caretaking” the duchy in this interlude—saw her rising star as nothing but a threat. And what do such men do when power trembles in their hands? They scheme, of course.

Assassination? Too crude. Poison? Too obvious, and besides, poison has the unfortunate habit of splashing back upon the poisoner. No, something subtler was required. Enter one greasy-fingered priest, whose cassock smelled suspiciously of cheap wine and worse sins. With a sanctimonious smile, he whispered a delicious little venom: “What if, good sirs, the young ladies were found guilty of witchcraft? Not stabbed, not strangled—condemned by law and faith alike! Oh, the beauty of it: their downfall would look like righteousness itself.”

The councilors, men who could barely conjure a thought without help, found this suggestion dazzling. Witchcraft! The very word promised smoke, fire, and scandal—yet without a drop of blood staining their own hands. And so the plot, odious and wicked, began to coil itself around the unsuspecting sisters, like a serpent tightening before the strike.


In the Duchy of Valcinox, appearances had always been weapons as sharp as swords. Lady Iris, though barely nineteen, knew this instinctively. When she resolved to confront the convent about the accusations hurled against her servants, she dressed with deliberate care. Her gown was woven of pale blue silk, the color of a spring sky after rain, embroidered at the hem with threads of silver lilies—her family’s emblem. A slender girdle of braided white leather cinched the dress at her waist, emphasizing her delicate form. Upon her shoulders rested a mantle of soft velvet, trimmed with white ermine, for though the day was mild, a daughter of dukes must carry the weight of dignity as well as cloth.

Her hair, golden and fine, was braided in the Valcinox style: one thick plait circling the crown of her head like a coronet, fastened with a silver clasp shaped as a falcon. Slippers of soft leather, dyed pearl-grey, covered her small feet. Every line of her appearance whispered nobility. Surely, she thought, no convent could mistake her innocence when she presented herself with such propriety. Ah, poor Iris! How touching is the faith of lambs who march willingly to the butcher’s gate.

The convent’s gates opened with solemn slowness, and the nuns who received her bowed with precise grace. They were not coarse women, these sisters; they knew the language of deference. Their curtseys were deep, their eyes lowered, their lips murmuring blessings. To Iris, it appeared an honorable welcome. To the council’s conspirators, it was the first tightening of the net.

Before the Mother Superior could be summoned, one of the elder nuns suggested, with a voice dripping honey, that Lady Iris might wish to cleanse her soul in confession. “A noblewoman so devoted surely will not neglect her duty,” the sister crooned. The words struck home, for Iris had indeed been busy the past week with matters of estate and had missed her usual confession. She hesitated only a moment before nodding. Yes, she would confess. Better to appear humble before God before demanding justice from His servants.

So she was led, step by innocent step, into a dim corridor smelling faintly of incense and old wood. At its end stood a confessional booth, larger than any she had seen in her youth. Its dark timbers loomed, carved with austere crucifixes, the lattice panels seeming almost to watch her. To Iris, it appeared impressive; to those who knew, it was a device.

She entered, expecting the quiet murmur of penance. The confessional smelled of polish and candle wax, with an undertone of something sharper—iron hinges, perhaps. She sat upon the narrow bench, smoothing her gown about her knees, and folded her hands demurely.

But the nun who approached this duty was no ordinary confessor. Sister Magdalithe, as she was known, was infamous among her order. She had the air of an inquisitor wrapped in a habit, with a tongue as sharp as her mind was cunning. Souls entrusted to her care seldom left without a sense of guilt, no matter how blameless. To her superiors, this was “efficacy.” To the accused, it was a spider’s silk spun with precision.

Magdalithe’s voice came through the lattice, smooth as cream but carrying a hidden hook. “My child, to be absolved one must offer not only words, but a posture of humility. Will you place your ankles through the small opening before you, that you might kneel properly before the Lord?”

Iris blinked, puzzled. She had never been asked such a thing. Yet the request was delivered with such calm authority that she dared not refuse. Obedience was expected of the faithful. She shifted uncertainly, sliding her ankles into the little opening at the base of the partition.

A wooden clasp descended with a muted clack, enclosing her slender ankles in place. Iris gave a small start. “Sister? Why is—?”

But Magdalithe’s voice overrode her, lilting with the practiced cadence of ritual. “Be still, child. The Lord sees all postures. We begin.”

At that moment, the nun’s hand reached through the lattice, deft fingers tugging at the laces of Iris’s slippers. The young lady’s breath caught. “My shoes—” she began, but again the words of Scripture rolled like a tide, drowning her protests. The slippers slipped away, one after another, leaving Iris’s pale, delicate feet bare against the cold wood. Her toes curled instinctively, unused to such exposure in a stranger’s presence.

Then came the cord. Soft, innocuous-looking, it looped around her great toes, binding them gently together before fastening to a small iron hook cunningly fixed at the booth’s base. Iris wriggled, a blush rising to her cheeks. This was no ordinary confession. The position was awkward, undignified. She felt suddenly very young, very vulnerable.

“Breathe, my child,” purred Magdalithe. “It is but a sign of devotion. Now, unburden your soul. Have you harbored pride? Anger? Impure thoughts?”

The questioning began, sharp and relentless. Iris, flustered and nervous, stammered through her answers. Yes, perhaps she had been prideful in commanding the servants. Yes, perhaps she had envied her sister’s strength. Each admission was seized upon, twisted, magnified.

And as she faltered, Magdalithe’s fingers brushed her bare soles through the lattice. A light touch at first, almost absent-minded—yet Iris jerked as though burned. The nun’s nail traced along the arch, a feather-light scratch that sent a shiver racing up Iris’s spine.

“My child,” came the honeyed whisper, “why do you laugh? Is it guilt that tickles you so?”

“I—I do not—” Iris tried, but the protest dissolved into breathless giggles as Magdalithe’s fingers danced with deliberate slowness across her tender soles. She wriggled helplessly, bound at the ankles, her toes twitching against their restraint.

Thus the “confession” unfolded, hour after hour. Each time Iris admitted a fault—no matter how trifling—the nun deepened her torment. A caress became a scratch, a scratch became a lingering tickle at the ball of her foot, the curve of her arch, the soft skin beneath her toes. Magdalithe knew the vulnerabilities of the body as keenly as those of the soul, and she played them both with merciless skill.

“Do you envy your sister Ana?” Scratch, scratch. Iris gasped.
“Have you doubted the council’s wisdom?” Tickle, tickle. She squealed, then sobbed.
“Have you harbored vanity in your beauty, pride in your station?” Her bare toes curled tight, straining against the cord as Magdalithe teased each one in turn.

Iris answered desperately, saying anything to stop the relentless game. The poor child did not realize that each word was being carefully noted, twisted into evidence. What she confessed under duress would become the noose for her reputation.

Time lost all meaning. The shadows lengthened. Sweat dampened Iris’s brow, her once-perfect gown crumpled and clinging to her trembling form. Her golden hair had loosened, strands falling wildly about her flushed face. By the time the bell tolled somewhere in the distance, two hours had crawled past.

At last, Magdalithe’s hands withdrew. Her voice, calm and satisfied, intoned the final blessing. “Go, my child. You are cleansed… for now.”

But Iris was not cleansed. She was shattered. Her feet throbbed, her nerves sang with exhaustion, her spirit quivered like glass. She sagged against the wooden booth, drained of dignity and strength alike.

The clasp released her ankles at last, but she had little time to gather herself. Even as she fumbled to slip her slippers back on, the door opened. A small procession of nuns awaited: stern faces, eyes glittering with curiosity, hands folded but steps precise. Their presence was not comfort but verdict.

In that instant, Iris understood. This was no ordinary confession, no harmless penance. She had been measured, tested, and found wanting—not by God, but by those who wished her downfall. The “confession” had merely been the prelude. What came next would be worse.

And as the nuns closed around her, guiding her deeper into the convent’s shadowed halls, Lady Iris of Valcinox realized—too late—that the true trial had only begun.

If Lady Iris had still nursed a fragile hope that her confession might be the end of things, it was plucked from her as swiftly as a flower from a stem. For no sooner had she staggered from the booth—her face pale, her hair disheveled—than she found herself hemmed in by a silent procession of nuns. They moved around her like shadows, their steps perfectly measured, their faces impassive, as if they had rehearsed this scene a thousand times.

At their head was Sister Magdalithe. Her hands were folded within the sleeves of her habit, her posture calm, her expression unreadable—but her eyes gleamed with quiet triumph. She did not touch Iris, nor raise her voice; she simply regarded the trembling noblewoman for a long, heavy moment. Then, with the smallest tilt of her head, she spoke two words that sealed Iris’s fate:

“Prepare her.”

Magdalithe turned and withdrew, her robes whispering against the stone floor, leaving her sisters to enact the order. The spider does not always strike herself; sometimes she simply tugs the threads and lets the web do its work.

The other nuns closed in at once, their silence more terrifying than any threat. They guided Iris down a narrow corridor that grew darker with each step until she passed into a small chamber lit by a single taper. The air was close, heavy with the scent of tallow and old wood. At its center stood a plain stool and, beside it, a chest of linen garments.

One nun gestured for Iris to stand still. Iris, misunderstanding, lifted her chin in defiance.
“I am Lady Iris of Valcinox. You forget yourselves! I came here to seek justice, not to be handled like—”

But her words died against the blank masks of their faces. They answered with no more than the slow unfastening of her mantle. Another pair of hands loosed the silver clasp from her hair. The velvet slid from her shoulders, the silk gown slumped to her hips. Iris gasped and pushed at their hands, but there was no violence in the touch of the sisters—only a steady, unanswerable insistence.

It is a strange cruelty, is it not? Threats can be defied, but silence cannot be argued with. Iris shouted her titles, invoked her father’s name, even pleaded for dignity, but each word sank into the hush like a stone cast into deep water. Piece by piece, her finery was stripped away until nothing of Valcinox nobility clung to her frame.

In its place they dressed her in garments of white linen, plain and severe. A skirt reached to mid-calf, modest in length yet coarse against her skin. A bodice was drawn tightly around her torso, but cut indecently low, exposing the swell of her breasts, her pale chest, even the tender hollows of her underarms. It was not modesty they sought—it was humiliation.

By the time they were finished, Iris’s golden hair hung loose about her shoulders, her cheeks flushed with shame and fury. She folded her arms across her chest, trying to conceal what the linen displayed so cruelly. “You cannot—this is sacrilege! I am no prisoner, I am no sinner!” she cried.

Still no reply. Only a gesture toward another doorway.

They ushered her into a hall larger than the last, its walls of bare stone, its floor strewn with rushes that whispered beneath her feet. At its center stood a chair—not a seat of authority, but a crude wooden device, heavy and merciless. Its back was high, its arms broad, and from it sprouted rings of iron and boards of oak.

The sight of it struck Iris with sudden dread. Her steps faltered. “No… no, this is wrong. I demand to see the Mother Superior!”

The nuns did not answer. They guided her—firmly, inexorably—toward the chair. Her protests grew louder, rising from command to plea, but their silence was unbroken. At last, they pressed her down upon the wooden seat.

The restraints closed one by one with dreadful efficiency. First her wrists, drawn behind the high back of the chair, bound so tight they forced her shoulders back, arching her chest into unwanted display. Iris writhed, but the more she strained, the more her posture betrayed her, baring her breasts and ribs, even the soft curve beneath her arms. She blushed crimson, half with shame, half with helpless fury.

Next came the ankle boards: pillories of polished oak fixed at the base. Each foot was guided, almost tenderly, into its hollow, and then—clack!—the upper halves locked, securing her ankles fast. Now her calves and feet were imprisoned, her bare soles turned outward, helplessly offered up.

Last, they adjusted the cruelest touch: a lattice of cords and small hooks fixed near the base of the chair. They were not yet drawn tight, but their presence was unmistakable—a device designed to spread and bind her toes, to stretch the tender skin of her soles for whatever torment might follow. Iris’s stomach twisted at the sight.

When all was complete, the nuns stepped back in unison, folding their hands before them, their faces as blank as carved saints. Not a word had been spoken from start to finish. Only the scrape of wood, the creak of rope, and the pounding of Iris’s heart.

So she sat: Lady Iris of Valcinox, daughter of dukes, once robed in silk and silver, now clad in coarse white linen that bared her most private flesh. Her arms were wrenched behind her, her chest exposed, her ankles locked in oak, her delicate soles offered up as though she were no noblewoman but a specimen upon an altar.

For the first time, true fear struck her. Until now she had believed—naïvely—that her name, her rank, her innocence would shield her. But here, in this bare chamber, with her body displayed and her limbs restrained, she understood: her titles meant nothing. She was no duchess-in-waiting. She was prey.

And when the heavy door at the far end of the hall creaked open, revealing the figures of those who would judge her, Iris’s blood ran cold. The true trial was about to begin.


The chamber had the weight of judgment in its stones. The rushes on the floor were stale, the torchlight sparse. The silence, thick as cloth, pressed down upon Iris as she writhed against the chair. Her arms strained uselessly, her chest arched forward, her bare soles trapped and vulnerable. She had thought humiliation the worst she might endure. She had not yet met the woman who orchestrated it.

The door creaked. A slow, deliberate sound. Into the hall swept Sister Magdalithe.

She did not hurry, nor raise her voice, nor betray triumph in her expression. Her presence alone was enough. The other nuns bowed slightly as she passed. Her shadow, long and gaunt, fell across Iris like a blade.

Iris gasped, her voice trembling between rage and plea. “I have confessed already! You cannot keep me bound like this. I told the truth—I have nothing more to say!”

Magdalithe’s lips curved into the faintest smile. “My child,” she purred, “your confession was but the beginning. A scratching of the surface. You confessed to pride, to envy, to vanities unworthy of your rank. But you have not yet spoken of darker matters. You have not yet confessed the true sin.”

Iris shook her head violently, golden hair flying about her flushed face. “No! I have no such sins. I am innocent. I will not allow you to twist my words.”

The nun drew closer, her habit whispering. She stood before the bound young woman, her eyes glittering with mock pity. “Your sister, Ana,” she murmured. “Bold, ambitious, adored by the troops. So bold, indeed, that whispers arise—whispers of unnatural aid. Do you mean to tell me she has won her battles by steel alone? No charms, no invocations, no unholy bargains whispered at midnight?”

“That is a lie!” Iris cried, her voice ringing. “Ana is no witch. She fights with courage, with the strength of her arm and the loyalty of our house. You dishonor her—”

Magdalithe’s hand moved with sudden swiftness, fingers darting beneath Iris’s arm to graze the tender hollow of her exposed underarm. The touch was feather-light, but Iris jerked violently, a startled laugh bursting from her lips before she could stop it.

“Ah,” murmured Magdalithe. “There it is. The body speaks truth even when the tongue resists. You are hiding something, child. Shall we coax it free?”

“I—no, you are mistaken—stop—” Iris gasped, twisting in her bonds, but the nun’s fingers had already begun their slow, deliberate work. They grazed, scratched, teased along the stretched skin of Iris’s underarm, coaxing helpless laughter from her lips.

“Ha—haha—no!—please, I—hahaha!”

The sound echoed harshly in the stone chamber. Iris’s head tossed from side to side, her cheeks flaming with shame. She tried to form words of denial, but every syllable dissolved into wild laughter.

Magdalithe tilted her head, as though listening to music. “See how your body confesses, child. It admits guilt with every gasp, every giggle. But your mouth… ah, your mouth is stubborn. Let us coax that, too.”

Her hand drifted downward, trailing along Iris’s bare side, circling across her ribs, then—oh, deliberate cruelty—cupping and teasing at the soft curve of her breast. Iris shrieked, half in laughter, half in outrage.

“No! Stop! You cannot—haahaha!—this is—this is not—HAHAH—”

The nun pinched lightly at a nipple, rolled it between finger and thumb with calculated malice, then shifted to the other, each motion sparking a squeal of protest tangled with uncontrollable laughter.

“My poor little lamb,” Magdalithe crooned over the cacophony, “is it shame you feel? Or is it the truth wrung from you by holy hands? Tell me of your sister’s sorcery. Tell me, and the torment ends.”

Iris tried, she truly tried, to force words through the laughter. “Ana—has no—haha—magic!—I swear it!—hahaha—she—”

The nun did not relent. Her hands alternated between underarm and breast, each caress a calculated assault on dignity and control. Iris laughed until tears streaked her cheeks, her body thrashing in the bonds, every muscle trembling.

And then, just as abruptly, Magdalithe drew back. Silence filled the chamber again, broken only by Iris’s ragged breathing, her sobbing laughter still echoing faintly.

Magdalithe crouched low, her face level with Iris’s, her eyes sharp as daggers. “It is so simple, child. A word from you, a mark upon the parchment, and all this ceases. Deny it, and we will continue. Endlessly. Patiently. Until you beg to speak the truth.”

Iris spat a tear from her lips, gasping for breath. “I… will not… betray her. You will not make me.”

The nun’s smile deepened. “Oh, my dear, you think you have endured much? We have not yet begun.”

She rose, moved to the foot of the chair. Iris’s heart leapt in dread, for she knew what lay there—the cruel hooks, the cords, the pillories.

“No—no, not that—” Iris struggled, but the oak boards held her ankles firm. Magdalithe knelt, her fingers deft as she looped cord around Iris’s delicate toes. First the big toes, bound together, then each smaller digit spread, tethered, drawn taut toward the little iron hooks fixed in the wood. One by one, her toes were tied apart, stretching the skin of her soles until they lay helplessly open, exposed, every tender curve displayed.

Iris whimpered, her laughter momentarily replaced by a gasp of sheer dread. “Please—please, I cannot—”

“Oh, you can,” Magdalithe murmured sweetly. “You will. And in the end, you will thank us for teaching your tongue to tell the truth.”

A signal was given. From the shadows, another nun approached, bearing a tray. Upon it lay brushes, quills, and fine-bristled tools, instruments of art turned to instruments of cruelty. Magdalithe selected a slender plume, its tip soft as breath. She held it up for Iris to see, her eyes gleaming.

“Your body will speak, if your lips will not.”

The feather traced lightly along the ball of Iris’s left foot. The reaction was instant. Iris shrieked with laughter, her whole body bucking against the restraints.

“HAHAHAAA! NO!—not there!—PLEASE—hahaha!”

“Confess,” Magdalithe intoned, “and it ends.”

The feather traveled upward, teasing the stretched arch, circling the tender heel, then flicking between each bound toe in merciless succession. Iris convulsed with helpless laughter, her pleas drowned in shrieking mirth.

Another instrument: a small brush, its bristles firmer. Magdalithe stroked it slowly across Iris’s right sole, up and down, relentless as a metronome. The girl’s laughter rose to hysteria, echoing against the stone, her body trembling so violently the chair itself creaked.

“Just a word,” Magdalithe said evenly. “One word, and this ceases. Your sister is a witch. Say it, sign it, and we free you.”

“HAHAHAAA—NEVER!—Ana is—innocent!—HAHAHAHAAA!”

The tools changed again—a fine quill, dragged along the creases of her arches. A stiff-bristled brush, scrubbed in little circles at her heel. The feather returned to torment her toes while the brush swept the other sole. Iris’s laughter became screams, her face scarlet, her throat raw. Yet still, between gasps, she shouted her denials.

“No sorcery!—HAHAHAAA—she fights with steel—NOT spells!—haahahaha!”

Minutes stretched into hours. Magdalithe worked with the patience of a craftsman, rotating instruments, varying strokes, coaxing every pitch of laughter from her victim. The other nuns stood silent, their faces unreadable, as if this were no cruelty at all but a sacred rite.

At last, Iris slumped in her bonds. Her body glistened with sweat, her chest heaving, her hair plastered to her flushed cheeks. She laughed still, weakly, each giggle torn from her as if from habit rather than will.

Magdalithe set aside the brush. She leaned close, her lips at Iris’s ear. “Stubborn little lamb. You think yourself victorious because you have not spoken? You think endurance a shield? Oh no, my dear. This is merely the beginning.”

She straightened, her voice now ringing with quiet authority. “Bring the beasts.”

The words hung in the air like a sentence of death. Iris’s exhausted eyes widened in terror, the last scraps of her strength coiling into dread. Whatever the brushes, the quills, the feathers had done—whatever humiliation she had endured—they had only been the prelude.

And in that moment, bound, broken with laughter yet still clinging to defiance, Lady Iris of Valcinox realized: the true ordeal was yet to come.

When Sister Magdalithe gave her order, Iris thought at first it must be some grotesque jest. The beasts? What beasts could dwell in a convent? Wolves in the cloister? Serpents in the vestry?

She had no answer, for her laughter-broken body sagged against the chair, too exhausted to question. But her eyes, wide and luminous, darted nervously about the chamber as the door creaked once more.

A procession of nuns entered—this time not empty-handed. They carried buckets of brine, their wooden sides damp and reeking of salt. Others bore bundles of brushes and fine-pointed paint-sticks. The sight of them was strange, incongruous: as though painters had stumbled into a tribunal. Iris, poor child, could not yet imagine what art they were about to practice upon her body.

She raised her head, strands of golden hair clinging to her damp cheeks. “What… what are you doing?”

Silence was her only reply. The sisters set down their buckets with heavy thuds, and the scent of salt filled the chamber like sea air trapped in stone. Magdalithe, serene and merciless, inclined her head. “Proceed.”

At once, the nuns dipped their brushes into the brine. The first stroke was laid across Iris’s arch—cool, wet, startling. She gasped, then yelped as the coarse bristles scratched between her bound toes.

“Hah—ah! What—what is—stop—hahah!”

The others joined in, each brush finding its mark. A slick line painted across her ribs. A careful daub beneath her arm. A deliberate stroke across the swell of each breast, circling the pink crowns until Iris squealed and jerked in her bonds. They worked with meticulous precision, as though consecrating her body with salt.

She squirmed, giggled, shrieked, her laughter bubbling again despite her fatigue. “Stop! It—it tickles—what—why—hahaha!”

No answer. Only the methodical whisper of bristles. They coated her soles until every crease shone damp with saline. They teased between her toes with tiny brushes, ensuring no fold was left untouched. They traced her underarms with painstaking care, dragging long strokes that drew peals of helpless laughter. They painted her breasts in broad swathes, then detailed the tender nipples with delicate flicks that left Iris whimpering through her giggles.

Salt clung to her skin, drying tacky and tight. She shivered with the sting of it, her nerves alive, her body quaking. She could not comprehend. What cruelty was this? Why brine, why brushes? The shame of exposure was enough, the laughter unbearable—but why this ritual of salt?

Her question found its answer soon enough.

The door opened once more, and with it came the sound that chilled her blood: the bleating of goats.

Four of them, led by novices, their hooves clattering against the stone, their eyes gleaming with animal curiosity. Creatures humble, docile, ridiculous—yet in this place, they were executioners.

Iris stiffened, her heart slamming against her ribs. “No—no, you cannot—”

Magdalithe stepped close, her shadow falling across Iris’s bound, brine-coated body. “One final chance, my child. Speak the truth of your sister’s sorcery. Sign the confession. And these gentle creatures need not trouble you.”

Through cracked lips, Iris rasped, “Ana… is no witch. I will not lie.”

The nun’s smile sharpened. “Then let the beasts judge your resolve.”

The first goat was brought forward, its muzzle twitching. It lowered its head toward Iris’s right foot, sniffing the salt-slick skin. Iris’s eyes went wide with horror. She flexed her toes desperately, straining against the cords, but they held fast, each digit splayed helplessly.

The tongue came—rough, wet, rasping across her sole.

Iris screamed. Not in pain, but in laughter so violent it shook the chair. “AHAHAHAAAA! NOOO—NOT THAT—HAHAHAAA!”

The goat licked again, sweeping its tongue from heel to toes, scraping the salt from her tender skin. Iris convulsed, her laughter shrill, her body jerking helplessly. Her toes curled, tried to flee, but the cords denied her. The animal persisted, steady, relentless.

“Please! HAHAHAHAA—STOP!—NOT MY FEET—HAHAHAAA!”

Another goat was led to her left foot. It wasted no time, burying its muzzle in the arch, lapping greedily. Now both soles were attended, each lick a fresh torment, each stroke of the rough tongue worse than the last.

Iris howled with laughter, twisting, tears streaming down her cheeks. She begged between shrieks, though her words were nonsense, swallowed by mirth.

“Mercy! Hahahaaa—please, I cannot—I cannot—HAHAAAA!”

Magdalithe watched with serene satisfaction. “You see, my lamb? The beasts are most diligent. They will strip every grain of sin from your skin. Confess, and they shall cease.”

“I—I won’t—hahahaaa!—Ana is innocent—hahahaaa!”

Her defiance only sharpened their zeal. Two more goats were brought forward, their muzzles nudging at her flanks. She had no time to protest before their tongues sought the brine upon her breasts and underarms.

The sensation was beyond words. Coarse tongues rasped over her nipples, lapping the salt in broad strokes, then darting into the hollows beneath her arms. Iris shrieked, convulsing, her laughter ascending into delirium.

“HAHAHAHAAAA! NOOO—NOT THERE!—PLEASE—STOP—HAHAAA!”

The four goats worked in concert: two at her feet, two at her chest and arms. Each lick dragged laughter from her lungs until she could scarcely breathe. Her body bucked and writhed, but the bonds held her in perfect offering.

Minutes stretched like hours. Salt was replenished, brushes reapplied. The goats returned, eager tongues scraping every inch of tender flesh. Iris laughed until her voice broke, until her body sagged in the chair, until tears and sweat drenched her skin.

But still she refused. Between gasps and screams, she shouted the same words: “Ana… is no witch… I will not… betray her!”

Magdalithe’s smile never wavered. She murmured softly to the watching sisters, “Let it continue. The night is young. The truth will come.”

And so it continued. Laughter pealed through the convent, wild, broken, ceaseless. It echoed down the cloisters, spilled into the chapel, startled the roosting crows. From her wooden throne, Lady Iris of Valcinox screamed and laughed and wept, her spirit battered by tongues and salt, her resolve tested to its last thread.

And outside the chamber, any who passed could hear it—the terrible, unending laughter of a young noblewoman, echoing through stone halls like the song of madness itself.
 
Very nice story, are you planning on making a second part, this time with Ana?
 
Here’s the next part

When dawn crept through the narrow windows of the convent, Lady Iris of Valcinox was no longer the radiant daughter of dukes. She was a hollow husk, trembling, drenched in sweat, her throat raw from laughter and screams. The goats had long since been led away, the brushes set aside, but their work was plain upon her face. She had broken.

The parchment lay before her on a lectern, the ink glistening in the torchlight. A confession, written not in her words but in those supplied by Sister Magdalithe’s hand. Iris, slumped in the cruel chair, had scrawled her name upon it with shaking fingers. She could barely remember doing so. She only knew that she had begged for the torment to end, and the quill had been thrust into her hand, and she had obeyed.

The confession named her sister Ana a sorceress. It spoke of unholy rites, of charms whispered over steel, of demons invoked for victory. Lies, all lies, but Iris’s signature made them truths in the eyes of the council. The trap had sprung, and she had been its bait.

Now she was led—no longer resisting—to the chambers of the Mother Superior. Two nuns guided her, one at each side, though she scarcely needed guiding. Her steps were slow, her eyes downcast. The golden-haired noble child of yesterday was gone. In her place walked a prisoner who believed herself condemned.

The Mother Superior awaited her, enthroned not in grandeur but in severe simplicity. She was a tall woman with a face lined like carved oak, her gaze both stern and patient. Before her lay the parchment of confession. She tapped it lightly with one long finger.

“So,” she said, her voice deep and even, “the lamb has spoken at last. You have admitted your sins, child?”

Iris’s lips quivered. She could not bring herself to meet that gaze. “Yes, Mother. I… I have sinned. Pride. Vanity. And—” She swallowed hard. “I have concealed what I knew of my sister’s dealings. I… I beg to be cleansed.”

The Mother Superior inclined her head, satisfaction flickering in her eyes. “Then you seek admission among us. You wish to leave behind the vanities of your station, the silks, the jewels, the false dignity of birth?”

Iris nodded faintly, tears trembling at the edges of her lashes. “Yes. Please, Mother. Let me remain. Let me serve.”

“Very well,” the Mother Superior said. “But you must understand—here you are not Lady Iris of Valcinox. Here you are nothing. You will obey. You will humble yourself in all things. You will live in prayer, silence, and service. Do you accept this, child?”

Iris bowed her head, her voice a whisper. “I accept.”

The Mother Superior raised her hand. “Prepare her.”

The ritual of stripping nobility was older than the convent itself. Every novice knew its steps, but rarely did they perform it upon one who had once been heir to a duchy. The symbolism was cruelly perfect.

The nuns brought Iris into a chamber bare of ornament save for a great copper basin. A single stool stood beside it. She was seated there, trembling, while the sisters gathered around.

First, they removed her soiled garments—the coarse linen bodice that had humiliated her, the skirt stiff with sweat and brine. She was left naked, her arms crossed in vain over her chest. The women worked in silence, ignoring her feeble protests.

Then came the shears. One sister seized a handful of golden hair, once her crown of beauty, and with a slow crunch of blades severed it at the roots. Iris gasped, a sob catching in her throat. Strand by strand, lock by lock, her braids were hacked away until her head was shorn to a ragged crop. The floor glittered with gold, a final offering to the gods of humility.

“Vanity is cut away,” intoned the Mother Superior, watching.

Next, her body was washed in the basin. Cold water, harsh soap, hands scrubbing without gentleness. The salt of her ordeal stung anew, raising gooseflesh upon her skin. She shuddered, teeth chattering, but did not resist. This was purification, they said, though it felt more like erasure.

When she was clean—or rather, raw—they clothed her. A rough tunic of unbleached linen was pulled over her head, falling shapelessly to her ankles. Its weave scratched her tender skin. A scapular, long and heavy, hung front and back like a yoke. A rope belt cinched her waist, knotted three times to signify obedience, poverty, chastity.

Her feet, scrubbed pink, were left bare. Sandals of wood and leather were set aside, to be used only when necessity demanded. Here, within the convent, she would walk barefoot always, a penitent close to the earth.

Finally, a coif and veil were drawn over her shorn head, hiding what remained of her hair. A mirror was brought—not for her vanity, but for her to see the truth.

Iris gazed at her reflection. Gone was the noble maiden in silks and silver clasps. In her place stood a pale figure, shapeless, barefoot, shorn, anonymous. Her lips trembled, but she whispered the words she had been taught: “I am nothing. I am His servant.”

The sisters bowed their heads. The rite was complete.

The Mother Superior addressed her, voice as steady as stone. “You are no longer Lady Iris of Valcinox. You are Sister Novice, penitent of this house. You will rise at dawn, pray at matins, labor in silence, and take your meals with the others. You will have no bed of velvet, only straw. No jewels, only rope. No name, only obedience. So shall your sins be washed away.”

Iris bowed low, whispering, “Yes, Mother.”

The other sisters led her to the novices’ dormitory. A row of straw pallets lined the wall, each identical, each poor. She lay upon one, curling into herself, the rough cloth scratching her skin. Exhaustion crushed her, yet sleep would not come. In her mind echoed the laughter torn from her lungs, the goats’ rasping tongues, the quill scratching her name upon the parchment. She had betrayed Ana. The thought gnawed at her, sharper than any bristle.

But she could not take it back. She was Sister Novice now.





That evening, the Mother Superior retired to her private chamber. Waiting there was a figure cloaked in black: the priest whose whisper had set this entire plot in motion. His face was lean, his eyes calculating, his lips curved in the smile of a man who sees his schemes bearing fruit.

The Mother Superior bowed slightly. “It is done. The girl has confessed. She has signed the document naming her sister a practitioner of sorcery.”

The priest’s smile deepened. “Excellent. With Iris’s testimony, none will doubt. When Ana returns, she will find herself ensnared in a web already woven.”

“She is strong,” the Mother Superior cautioned. “She commands troops, she has the loyalty of men. To strike her directly would be folly.”

“Ah,” murmured the priest, steepling his fingers, “but soldiers may follow a commander’s sword. They will not follow a woman condemned by her own blood. Iris’s confession is the blade that severs Ana’s honor. Once we present it to the council, Ana will fall as surely as if struck by a dagger.”

The Mother Superior inclined her head. “Then the duchy is secured. The sisters will keep Iris within our walls. She is broken, docile. There will be no danger of retraction.”

The priest rose, his robes rustling. “Well done, Mother. The council will be most pleased. Valcinox shall not pass to the daughters of dukes, but remain under proper guardianship. And the people will believe it justice.”

He turned, his shadow spilling long across the stone. “Let Ana return. We are ready.”

And so the conspiracy tightened, its trap baited with the broken spirit of a once-proud noble child. Far away, on the field of war, Ana fought still, unaware that her sister’s laughter had already sealed her fate.
 
Sorry for the delay, I’ve been a bit busy lately. Here’s the next part, I hope you enjoy it.


Ana returned to Valcinox in triumph.

The city gates swung wide at her approach, banners snapping in the wind, the stone arch garlanded in hastily woven flowers. Her mare’s hooves rang against the cobbles, and the people flocked to see her: traders with ink-stained fingers, women still wearing flour on their aprons, children craning for a glimpse of the commander whose victories had kept the war far from their doors.

Men cheered. Women waved scraps of cloth. A few veterans saluted with the stiff gravity of those who knew what it meant to stand where she had stood.

Ana drank it in. She let the sound wash over her, not because she craved admiration—though that was pleasant enough—but because this was proof. Proof that the risks, the sleepless nights, the dead she’d left unburied on cold hillsides had meant something.

Valcinox was still here. Her father’s duchy still breathed.

Victory clung to her like dust and sweat. Her mail shirt still smelled faintly of iron and smoke under the cloak thrown over it. There were bruises on her shoulders and a shallow cut near her collarbone where a spear had come too close. Her body ached in ways she would only feel properly once she stopped moving. For now, the city’s acclaim numbed everything.

Well, almost everything.

She noticed the first wrong note in the courtyard.

When she swung down from the saddle, a groom hurried forward to take the mare’s reins. He wore the Valcinox colors correctly, his bow was perfectly timed, his hands competent on the bridle. All very proper.

Ana looked at him and thought, Who are you?

“Easy, girl,” the groom murmured to the mare. To Ana he added, “Welcome home, my lady.”

“Where is Rylan?” she asked. “He’s handled this mare since she first stumbled out of the foal pen.”

The groom’s eyes flickered. “The old master of stables has retired, my lady. The council appointed me in his place.”

“Retired?” she repeated. Rylan, who had served her grandfather and her father both, who swore every winter that he would die in the stables rather than a bed? That Rylan?

The groom was already leading the horse away. Around her, footmen she did not recognize stood lined in a neat row. Valets she had never seen before waited by the great doors. Their uniforms were perfect. Their faces were wrong.

She crossed the courtyard with her cloak slung over one arm and the sword still belted at her hip. The stone beneath her boots was unchanged; the echo of her steps was not.

Inside the entrance hall, the air smelled of beeswax and incense. The walls were hung with the same tapestries that had watched her run through these corridors as a child. Yet the men who bowed to her now were strangers, fat with caution.

Ana stopped in the center of the hall.

“Where is Steward Hallen?” she asked.

A footman—new, stiff—stepped forward. “My lady, Steward Hallen has stepped down. Lord Leontan Merwe has assumed his duties under the authority of the city council.”

Of course he had. If there was a vacant chair and coin attached to it, Leontan Merwe would find a way to sit in it.

“Send for him,” Ana said.

He arrived quickly, which suggested either eagerness or foreknowledge. Leontan was a man whose body had softened with age and comfort, but whose clothes remained sharp. Rings gleamed on his fingers; his hair was carefully arranged to look as though it had gone silver with honorable worries rather than safe ones.

He bowed deeply. “My lady Ana. Valcinox rejoices at your return. The council joins its voice to the people in praising your valor.”

There it was: honey first, thorns after.

Ana let him straighten, then said, “The people I recognize. This household, I do not. Where are my father’s staff?”

Leontan spread his hands in an apologetic gesture. “Change is sometimes necessary, my lady. In difficult times, we needed… more reliable administration.”

“You’re telling me old Hallen and Rylan the groom were unreliable?”

“I am saying,” he replied carefully, “that the council deemed certain changes prudent. In your absence, someone had to see to order.”

“In my absence?” Ana repeated, a thread of ice winding through her tone. “I have been fighting for this duchy, Lord Leontan. Not abandoning it.”

He winced. “Of course, of course. No one questions your dedication. The Emperor himself does not. Indeed, we have received word: in three months’ time, your formal investiture as Duchess of Valcinox will be proclaimed.”

Three months.

She knew the process: the slow grind of imperial seal and courier, the ritual, the ceremonials. It made sense. It also meant that, on parchment, Valcinox was still a duchy without a head.

“So until then,” she said slowly, “you and your fellow councilors have decided that my father’s house needed to be… corrected?”

“Stabilized,” he said. “Governed. Under the regency of the council, in absence of the comtesses.”

It was said almost smoothly. Almost.

Ana’s eyes narrowed. “In absence of whom?”

He swallowed. ``In absence of the comtesses, my lady.”

“I stand before you,” she replied. “Last I checked, that meant at least one comtesse was not absent.”

His gaze flicked away, then back. Courage, for Leontan, was a thin, fragile thing, easily cracked. “I… refer to your sister, my lady. To Lady Iris.”

Ana went very still.

“What of Iris?”

Leontan smoothed his doublet with damp fingers. “She is no longer resident in the castle. She has… renounced her claims. She has entered religious life.”

For a heartbeat, the words did not make sense. They bumped against the inside of her skull like moths against glass.

Then Ana laughed. Not long, not loud, just once: a sharp, disbelieving sound.

“My sister? Iris? You expect me to swallow that she has voluntarily abandoned Valcinox to grind her knees on a chapel floor?”

“It is not as crude as that,” Leontan muttered. “She has joined the Order of Saint Vaux. A very respectable—”

“You are telling me,” Ana cut in, “that Iris left without telling me. Without a letter. Without a word. And no one thought to send notice to my camp?”

“There were concerns about distracting you from the campaign,” he said quickly. “We were assured that you would be informed… at an appropriate moment.”

She took a step toward him. He was taller than Iris, shorter than her father, and at this distance she could see sweat gathering at his hairline.

“And who,” she asked, voice low, “assured you of that?”

Before he could answer, the doors at the far end of the hall opened.

A man in dark priest’s robes entered, walking with the measured pace of one accustomed to being observed. A silver chain glinted at his chest, bearing the sigil of Saint Vaux: a stylized cross encircled by a crown of thorns. His hair, dark streaked with gray, was neatly trimmed; his face was composed in that particular serenity that comes less from inner peace than from long practice.

“Lady Ana,” he said, bowing with elegant precision. “I am Father Mederic of Saint Vaux. May the peace of our Lord be upon your home.”

Leontan looked as relieved as a man whose house had just caught fire and then spotted a bucket of water. “Ah—Father Mederic. Yes. He can explain.”

Ana did not bow. “I am told my sister has thrown herself into a cloister. I am told this was her choice. I am also told that no one thought it necessary to inform her only remaining kin. You will forgive me if I do not feel particularly peaceful.”

Mederic straightened, folding his hands. His eyes were dark and attentive, the sort that made a show of listening deeply. “Grief takes many forms, my lady. After your father’s death, your sister’s soul was… troubled. She came to us seeking counsel. Over time, she discerned a calling.”

“Iris,” Ana said flatly, “could not make up her mind whether she preferred roses or lilies at table. And you expect me to believe she has chosen a life of fasting and silence?”

A hint of a smile touched the corners of his mouth, gone before it fully formed. “Vocations are often surprising. The Lord calls whom He wills.”

“The Lord,” she replied, “conveniently calls away the only person standing between the council and complete control over Valcinox.”

Leontan made a strangled sound. “My lady, you are being unfair—”

“Hush,” she snapped without looking at him. Her gaze stayed on the priest. “If my sister has taken vows, I will hear it from her mouth, not yours.”

“Understandable,” Mederic said softly. “Truly. Family bonds are not lightly severed.”

“Good,” Ana said. “Then I’ll see her. Today.”

Leontan flinched. “My lady, the convent is—”

“Spare me,” she said. “I have faced cavalry charges and sieges. I think I can manage a gate of nuns.”

Mederic raised one hand, mild and calming. “May I offer a word of caution?”

“You may attempt to,” she answered.

“The Sisters of Saint Vaux are cloistered,” he said. “They live in enclosure, in contemplation. Their rule is strict. They rarely admit outsiders, and never under threat.”

“Who is threatening them?” Ana asked, genuinely puzzled.

He let his gaze rest for a moment on the sword at her hip, the mail beneath her cloak, the mud still clinging to her boots. “You are a commander, my lady. Triumphant. Your very presence speaks of force and war. If you ride to their humble house in armor, with soldiers at your back, the sisters will see an attack where you intend a visit. They may bar their doors to protect their peace.”

The argument was subtle. It did not accuse. It flattered and warned at once.

Ana’s jaw tightened. The part of her that had wanted—instinctively—to bring a detachment of loyal veterans to demand answers felt suddenly crude, almost childish.

“So I am to creep there like a supplicant?” she asked.

“I would never use such a word,” Mederic replied smoothly. “You are your father’s daughter, and soon, by imperial decree, Duchess of this land. I suggest you go as such: not as a war-leader, but as a sister. Without steel to rattle their nerves. Without soldiers to frighten them. Dignity can open doors that swords close.”

She hated that it made sense.

She also hated the image of herself turning up at the convent gates bristling with armor and men, only for some pale-faced abbess to clutch her rosary and refuse Iris to her.

“If they refuse me,” she said quietly, “I will not be kept from her.”

“I do not doubt your resolve,” Mederic said, inclining his head. “My hope is simply to make your path smoother, not block it. Allow me to ride ahead at dawn. I will speak with the Mother Superior. I am certain that if you arrive in proper decorum, they will grant you an audience.”

Ana studied him. He was very good. Too good. Everything he said sounded reasonable, even generous.

“Why such interest in my family, Father?” she asked. “You speak as if Iris belonged to you now.”

“She belongs to God,” he said. “I merely serve where He has placed me. But I will admit… your sister has a gentle soul. It would pain me to see conflict arise between her past and her present.”

Conflict. An elegant way of saying between you and us.

“And Iris asked for this?” Ana persisted. “She told you she wished to cut ties with her inheritance? With me?”

“A heart wounded by loss sometimes seeks the surest walls,” he replied. “She spoke of the dangers of the world, of turmoil, of ambition. She wanted a place where she could no longer harm nor be harmed.”

Ana flinched, just a little. Those could have been Iris’s words—or the version of Iris that had grown under the shadow of their father’s death.

“Then she will tell me so herself,” she said. “To my face.”

“As you wish.” Mederic bowed again. “I will make all arrangements. On the morrow, if it pleases you, you may ride to Saint Vaux. Come in your formal dress, with perhaps a small personal retinue if you must—but no armed company, no mail, no banners of war. Let the sisters see you as kin, not conqueror.”

Ana exhaled slowly. She could feel Leontan’s unease, Mederic’s composure, the weight of the hall itself watching her.

“Very well,” she said at last. “Tomorrow, then. I go as Iris’s sister, not as captain of the host.”

“A wise distinction,” Mederic murmured.

He took his leave with all the grace of a man who had just guided fate in the direction he desired. Leontan followed him to the door, looking like someone who had narrowly escaped being crushed between two grinding stones.

When they were gone, the hall felt strangely hollow around Ana.

She stood there a moment longer, fingers brushing the hilt of her sword. The leather was worn where her hand had gripped it in battle. It had been good to her. Useful. Honest. Steel did not lie.

She unbuckled the belt and handed it to one of the new footmen. “Clean this. Oil the blade. Have it ready in my chamber when I return from the convent.”

The man bowed. “Yes, my lady.”

She climbed the stairs to her rooms. The corridors were the same length as ever, but every corner seemed to turn a fraction too soon, every shadow to lie a fraction too deep. Servants bowed and flattened themselves against the walls as she passed. Not one face was a relic of her childhood.

In her chamber, the fire had been laid and lit before her arrival. Someone—new again—had arranged a gown on the bed: deep blue silk, embroidered subtly at the sleeves with silver falcons. A garment meant for audiences, for councils, for occasions when one needed to look like power rather than wield it.

Ana closed the door and let her shoulders slump for the first time since she had crossed the city gate. Her body ached; the cut near her collarbone pulled when she shrugged out of her cloak. She unfastened the mail with stiff fingers, feeling the weight lift from her like a second skin stripped away.

The silence of the room pressed in. Here, for a few heartbeats, there were no cheering crowds, no councilors, no priests with careful words.

“Iris,” she whispered, staring at the gown laid out like a waiting verdict. “What have they done to you?”

No answer came, of course. Only the crackle of the fire and the muffled noises of a castle that no longer quite belonged to her.

In the morning, she would put on silk instead of steel. She would ride not at the head of a column of soldiers, but with perhaps a maid and a single attendant, as propriety allowed. She would arrive at the gates of Saint Vaux as a sister seeking another, open-handed.

Somewhere beyond the city walls, Father Mederic was already planning the words he would use with the Mother Superior. The net had been cast weeks ago. All that remained was for Ana to step, willingly and unarmed, into its center.

For now, she sat on the edge of her bed, staring at the dress that would take her there.
 
Ana is ensnared


Ana had not slept much, despite the castle’s restored comfort. The mattress was soft, the sheets clean, the fire steady—yet her mind refused the luxury. It returned, again and again, to the same images: Leontan’s damp hands, the polished calm of Father Mederic, and Iris—impossible Iris—supposedly hidden behind a convent wall.

At dawn she rose with a strange clarity that felt almost like anger. Today I will set everything straight, she told herself. It was the kind of thought that steadied a commander before battle: simple, direct, reassuring.

And yet questions kept slipping through the cracks.

How could Iris have joined an order without a word? Had she truly chosen it? Or had she been pushed, frightened, shepherded into obedience by people who wore holiness like a mask? Too much had changed in three weeks. Too many faces in the corridors. Too much careful politeness from men who used to tremble in her father’s shadow.

For now, nothing was certain—except that uncertainty itself had become intolerable.

She was still fastening the last clasp of her morning dress when a sealed message was brought to her. The wax bore the mark of Saint Vaux. She broke it cleanly and read without sitting.

Father Mederic’s handwriting was measured and elegant. He confirmed that the convent would grant her a visit—brief, supervised, and, as he phrased it, “a courtesy.”

“A courtesy,” Ana repeated under her breath.

The word tasted wrong. It implied permission. It implied limits. It implied that Iris’s life was now a matter to be negotiated rather than reclaimed.

As if someone is kindly allowing me to look at my own sister, she thought. And beneath that, sharper still: As if the matter is already sealed.

She folded the letter slowly.

“No,” she said aloud, to the empty chamber. “I’m bringing her back with me.”

If she was wrong—if Iris truly wished to remain—then Iris would say so to her face. But until that moment, Ana would not accept the council’s version of events, nor the priest’s soft phrases, nor the convent’s “courtesies.” Iris was blood. Iris was Valcinox. Iris was not a rumor.

Within the hour, the carriage was made ready.

Ana chose not to ride. A carriage could pass as courtesy; a mounted commander might be taken as provocation. She dressed as a noblewoman, not a soldier: a dark traveling gown with a fitted bodice, a cloak lined with fur for the winter air, her hair bound with a simple silver clasp rather than any battlefield braid. No armor. No sword displayed. But she wore her authority the way she always had—quietly, like a blade kept close.

Her escort was light: a handful of guards in plain livery rather than full parade, enough to satisfy propriety without seeming like a threat. And beside her, seated with careful posture and watchful eyes, was her lady-in-waiting—one of the few faces Ana still trusted to speak honestly.

The castle gates opened. The carriage rolled out. The city fell behind.

As the wheels turned over the road’s frozen ruts, Ana stared out at the pale fields, letting the rhythm of travel steady her breathing. Her thoughts ran ahead of her like scouts.

She imagined Iris stepping forward, pale but smiling, speaking gently of vows and peace. She imagined Iris frightened, forced to speak rehearsed words, eyes lowered like a captive. She imagined confrontation, tears, anger—then resolution.

She imagined herself returning to Valcinox with Iris beside her, the lie exposed, the household restored, the council reminded—politely, firmly—of its place.

The carriage continued toward Saint Vaux, small against the winter landscape.


The convent of Saint Vaux did not rise from the landscape so much as it emerged from it—stone the color of old bone, walls severe and window-slim, as if the building had been designed to admit prayer and exclude everything else. Winter had blanched the fields around it. Bare branches scratched at the sky. Even the road seemed to quiet itself as the carriage approached, as though the very earth knew to lower its voice near cloistered things.

Ana watched the gates as they grew larger. She told herself, again, that this was courtesy, not conquest; family, not politics. She kept her posture composed, her chin lifted, her hands still in her lap.

Her lady-in-waiting sat opposite her, gloved fingers folded, expression calm. A trusted face. A familiar voice. Ana had chosen her precisely because she expected the world to become slippery here—because she wanted one person beside her who would not slide.

The gates opened.

Not wide, not welcoming—just enough to admit them. The courtyard inside was clean, almost too clean, swept so thoroughly that the stones looked scrubbed of history. Nuns moved quietly in the periphery like pale birds, heads bowed, hands tucked into sleeves. Somewhere a bell sounded, slow and measured, and the sound seemed to settle on Ana’s shoulders like a reminder.

A small group awaited her at the foot of the steps. They did not look like women who had devoted themselves to tenderness. Their faces were composed with practiced neutrality, their gaze lowered in deference that felt less like respect than choreography.

At the center stood Sister Magdalithe.

She smiled as Ana descended from the carriage—softly, politely, as one might smile at a guest who had already been expected. Her eyes, however, were sharper than her mouth. They measured Ana as a butcher measures a carcass: not with disgust, but with professional interest.

“Lady Ana of Valcinox,” Magdalithe said, inclining her head. “Peace be upon you. You honor our house.”

Ana returned the nod, refusing to mirror the nun’s warmth. “I have come to see my sister.”

“Of course.” Magdalithe’s smile deepened by a fraction. “We understand the bonds of blood. You will be granted a visit.”

Granted. Always that word—permission dressed as mercy.

“Lead the way,” Ana said.

Magdalithe gestured toward the doors. “This way, my lady.”

Ana entered the convent. The air inside was cool and heavy with incense. Stone corridors stretched ahead, lit by pale winter light and the occasional candle. The silence had a texture—thick, absorbing, as though sound itself was considered an indecency here.

They walked in a small procession: Magdalithe in front, Ana behind, her lady-in-waiting close at her shoulder. Ana noted every turn, every archway, every shadowed niche. Habit from war. Habit from living among men who smiled while plotting.

After a time, the corridor forked.

Magdalithe slowed, then turned slightly, her hands folded. “The parlor is prepared,” she said. “But there are formalities. The Mother Superior requests—out of respect—that you approach through the chapter passage. It is the proper route for noble visitors.”

Ana’s eyes narrowed. “The proper route?”

“It is tradition,” Magdalithe replied smoothly. “You will not wish to insult the rule of the house.”

Ana’s patience tightened like a strap. She had not come to insult anyone. She had come to take Iris by the hand and bring her home. Yet already, the convent’s language had begun its work—soft words that placed rules above blood, procedure above urgency.

She glanced at her lady-in-waiting. “Is that customary?”

The woman did not meet her eyes. “It is… not unheard of,” she said. Her voice was careful, almost timid. “If it smooths the meeting, my lady… perhaps it is best.”

Ana stared. Something in her chest shifted—small, almost imperceptible, like a buckle beginning to slip.

But she told herself it was nothing. Nerves. An unfamiliar place. Too many months of trusting only soldiers and steel.

“Fine,” she said. “We go as they prefer.”

Magdalithe’s smile said thank you without the words.

They took the chapter passage.

It was longer than Ana expected. The air grew colder. The incense thickened. The stone underfoot changed subtly—from worn corridor flagstones to broader slabs that seemed older, less traveled. The nuns who passed them bowed lower, and a few disappeared behind curtains as if fleeing the sight of her.

Ana’s lady-in-waiting walked closer now, almost guiding her by proximity.

“Strange,” Ana murmured. “This does not feel like the way to a parlor.”

“It is only… deeper within,” the lady replied, too quickly.

Ana stopped.

Magdalithe paused ahead, half-turned, waiting with exquisite patience.

Ana looked at her companion. “Look at me.”

A fraction of hesitation. Then the woman lifted her gaze.

Ana saw it instantly—the tightness around the mouth, the faint pallor beneath powdered composure. The look of someone who had chosen a side and prayed it would not be noticed.

“You,” Ana said quietly, the word turning cold. “Where are you taking me?”

The lady-in-waiting swallowed. “My lady, please—”

Magdalithe spoke, as gently as a knife sliding into silk. “Do not distress yourself. You will have your answers.”

Ana’s hand moved instinctively toward her hip—toward the familiar reassurance of a blade that was not there. She had left steel behind for courtesy. She had come dressed in silk and dignity.

And silk, she realized, could not cut through a trap.

The doors ahead were enormous, iron-banded oak. Two robust nuns—broad-shouldered, faces blank—stood on either side as if they were guards rather than sisters. Magdalithe nodded to them.

The doors swung open.

Ana stepped forward—and walked into a room that was not a parlor, not a chapel, not any space designed for comfort or reconciliation.

It was the chapter hall. Vast, vaulted, echoing. A place where voices could be made to sound like verdicts. Long benches had been pushed aside. The center had been cleared as though for a trial. Torches burned high along the walls, their smoke staining the air. A heavy table stood near the front, bearing parchment and seals.

And above it all, on a raised dais so high it forced the neck to tilt back, sat the tribunal.

Men of the council. Their robes dark, their expressions solemn with the theatrics of righteousness. Faces Ana recognized from her father’s court—some older, some newer, all suddenly unified. Among them sat Leontan Merwe, looking as though he had been dressed for his own funeral.

And beside them—slightly higher still—was the Mother Superior, her posture rigid, her gaze carved from stone.

They looked down at Ana as one might look down at an animal brought in for inspection.

For a heartbeat, the shock was so sharp it felt like silence breaking.

Then Ana’s mind snapped into clarity.

This was not a misunderstanding.

This was judgment.

Her lady-in-waiting took a half-step back, slipping away from Ana’s side like a rat leaving a sinking ship. Ana turned her head slowly, incredulous.

“You brought me here,” she said.

The woman’s eyes were wet. “I was told—” she began.

“Told what?” Ana demanded. “That I was dangerous? That I needed to be delivered like a package?”

Magdalithe closed the doors behind them with a soft, final sound.

That sound was louder than the torches.

The Mother Superior spoke first, her voice carrying effortlessly in the hall. “Lady Ana of Valcinox. You stand before holy and lawful authority. You will answer for grave accusations.”

Ana’s gaze swept the dais. She did not bow. She did not lower her eyes.

“What is this?” she said, voice tight with disbelief. “I came to see my sister.”

One of the councilmen rose—a thin man with a narrow beard and a voice practiced for public condemnation. “You came because you believed yourself untouchable,” he said. “Because you have bewitched the Emperor’s favor and deceived the empire.”

Ana’s laughter was not humor. It was the sound of a warrior hearing a child claim to have slain a dragon.

“Bewitched?” she repeated.

“Do not mock,” the man snapped. “We have testimony. We have evidence.”

Another councilman spoke, his tone oily. “You are accused of fashioning a wax effigy—an image of His Imperial Majesty—through which you ensnared his will. That you compelled his admiration. That you secured victories not by talent, not by discipline, but by sorcery.”

Ana stared at him, stunned by the sheer delirium of it.

Then she understood the danger.

Because the accusation did not need to be plausible to be lethal. It only needed to be spoken from a high enough dais, in a holy enough room, by enough mouths at once.

She stepped forward, anger rising, voice cutting through the hall. “This is madness. I fought in mud. I bled. Men died at my side. If you want to explain my victories, you can begin with training and steel, not—wax dolls.”

The thin-bearded councilman lifted a hand. “And yet the victories were too timely. Too perfect. Too… favored. So favored that rumors reached even the Emperor’s court. Rumors of unnatural aid.”

Rumors. The empire’s oldest weapon.

Ana’s eyes flashed. “Rumors are for cowards.”

Leontan flinched visibly at that.

The Mother Superior leaned forward slightly, and the movement itself stilled the room. “It is not only rumor,” she said. “It is confession.”

A nun stepped from the side of the dais, carrying a parchment. Even from where Ana stood, she could see the heavy seal at its base.

The parchment was held up like a relic.

The Mother Superior’s voice lowered, almost reverent. “A written testimony, offered freely and signed. By your own blood.”

Ana’s breath caught.

Magdalithe, at Ana’s shoulder, murmured with quiet malice, “Look closely.”

The parchment was turned so the hall’s torchlight struck it cleanly. Lines of ink. Formal language. Accusations arranged into neat, righteous sentences.

And at the bottom, a signature.

IRIS OF VALCINOX.

Ana’s world narrowed to that single word.

“No,” she said—softly at first, as if the syllable could undo ink. “No.”

The thin-bearded councilman’s smile was barely contained. “Your sister confirms that you have trafficked in witchcraft. That you have used forbidden arts to secure influence and victory. That you possess a statuette of wax through which you have laid hands upon the Emperor’s mind.”

Ana took a step forward, then another, as if she could physically reach the parchment and tear the lie from it.

“This is forged,” she said, voice shaking now with fury. “Or she was coerced. Iris would never—”

“You will not accuse holy women of coercion in a holy hall,” the Mother Superior cut in. “Your sister sought salvation. She confessed. She signed. She is at peace.”

Ana turned, eyes wild, searching the room as if Iris might appear from behind a pillar, laughing at the absurdity. “Where is she?” Ana demanded. “Bring her here. Let her speak!”

Magdalithe’s tone was almost kind. “She has spoken.”

Ana’s hands clenched. She looked at the doors—at the two robust nuns still stationed there. She looked left—another set of doors, narrower, now blocked by men in dark livery whose faces held the calm of hired obedience. She looked right—yet another exit, where two more figures waited.

Every path had acquired a body.

Every body had acquired permission.

Ana’s pulse thundered. Her mind, trained by war, measured distance and opportunity. She was unarmed. She was dressed for civility. But she was still a warrior, and warriors did not surrender simply because a room wished them to.

She moved suddenly—swift as a striking hawk—toward the nearest side door.

A guard stepped in her way.

Ana slammed her shoulder into him. He stumbled back, surprised by the force of a woman in silk. She drove her elbow up into his throat with practiced brutality, and he gagged, folding.

For a heartbeat, the hall froze in shocked silence.

Then bodies surged.

The tribunal’s calm cracked into motion. The nuns at the doors moved like trained wardens, not gentle sisters. One grabbed Ana’s cloak from behind. Ana spun, ripping free, and struck the woman hard across the jaw. The nun staggered, but did not fall.

Ana lunged again toward the exit.

Two more figures caught her—one at the arm, one at the waist. Ana twisted, using their grip against them, wrenching her elbow down into ribs, driving a knee back. Someone grunted in pain. Another hand seized her wrist from behind, wrenching it upward. Ana snarled, fought, kicked.

She was strong. She was furious. She was not a frightened noblewoman.

But the hall had numbers.

Hands closed in from all sides—guards and robust sisters, bodies trained to restrain without hesitation. Ana’s silk tore at the shoulder. Her hair came loose. She slammed her heel into a shin and felt bone yield, but another grip replaced the one she broke.

Someone caught her from behind in a crushing hold. Ana threw her head back, striking a face—felt cartilage crunch—yet still they did not let go.

Her breath came in harsh bursts. She fought like a storm trapped in a bottle.

And then the bottle tightened.

A heavy weight drove into her legs. She lost balance. The floor rose to meet her. She went down hard, the impact knocking air from her lungs. Before she could surge up again, a knee pinned her shoulder, another pressed into her thigh. Rough hands forced her arms behind her back.

Ana screamed—not in fear, but in rage.

“Cowards!” she spat, struggling. “You hide behind habits and paper!”

The Mother Superior’s voice drifted down from above, calm as snowfall. “Restraint.”

A cord—coarse, biting—was wrapped around Ana’s wrists. Her hands were bound tight behind her. Another restraint tightened around her ankles.

Ana’s face pressed to the cold stone, hair across her eyes, her breath hot against the floor. For a moment she lay still, not because she had surrendered, but because she was absorbing the fact that the fight had shifted into a new terrain—one where strength alone would not win.

Magdalithe crouched beside her, close enough that Ana could smell incense and clean linen.

“Such spirit,” Magdalithe murmured. “Your sister’s confession did not exaggerate your willfulness.”

Ana lifted her head as far as the restraints allowed, eyes blazing. “You will regret this.”

Magdalithe’s smile returned—quiet, satisfied. “Perhaps. But not today.”

Ana was hauled upright by force, dragged to her knees. The hall swam slightly, torches smearing into streaks of light as her pulse hammered. She looked up at the dais again—at Leontan’s pale face, at the councilmen’s righteous masks, at the Mother Superior’s immovable gaze.

She understood then the true cruelty of it: this was not merely a trap to capture her body. It was a trap designed to break her story. To turn her victories into suspicion, her honor into evidence, her very rise into proof of sin.

And the worst blade of all was Iris’s name at the bottom of that parchment.

Ana’s voice lowered, ragged with fury. “Iris didn’t do this willingly.”

The Mother Superior did not blink. “Your sister is at peace.”

Ana’s laugh this time was raw and bitter. “Then peace is just another word for captivity.”

Magdalithe stood and signaled. The guards—or sisters—began to drag Ana toward the side passage, deeper into the convent.

Ana fought again, even bound, kicking and twisting, but it was useless now. The hall had swallowed her.

As she was pulled away, the chapter hall remained luminous with torchlight and sanctimony, the tribunal above her serene once more, as if the violence had been a minor inconvenience.
 
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