Thanks!
On my deviantart account I actually spread it out over 4 parts, but wanted to keep things simple here. <<<<----
I like to build suspense too. But I also didn't want to keep from the revenge part for too long. :P
Thanks for the feedback! :)
There is a follow up currently posted. : ) http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=126238
I'm doing a mix of ?/F and F/F stories but I rely on my muse.
Best wishes!
I have also reconsidered this story as well. As I said for the last one...I feel like its far too contrived, and that there are authors who just do what I do better. The more I think about the stories I wrote the more silly I find them...so I've decided to move on. There's just something...
I have reconsidered this story. I feel like its far too contrived, and that there are authors who just do what I do better. The more I think about the stories I wrote the more silly I find them...so I've decided to move on. There's just something wrong with what I wrote and while I got some...
You can report them to the mods. It also helps for the original owners of the art and their friends to start posting in their comments so other people get the idea before the jerk is banned.
Art thieves are awful
I have removed this story for the same reason I removed the others. I just don't feel they're that good and I've decided to give up.
While I received some good feedback which I am very appreciative of, as a writer I just am not happy with how the turned out.
The shading is fantastic, a very vibrant color scheme, and the post reflects Euphoria truly contemplating the tickle torture she is delivering. <<<<----