About your story, the description was precisely why I enjoyed so much. Too many people on this site just want the quick thrill and don't really care about the story. They only want the moneyshot. Personally, I want to read a story. So in my opinion your story was a very good ratio. I think that stories can entertain both the brain and the body.
Reading your last few stories inspired me to get cracking on my own story. I have the second chapter written in my mind. I just need to put it down on "paper".
Reading your last few stories inspired me to get cracking on my own story. I have the second chapter written in my mind. I just need to put it down on "paper".