Finally finished, a 9 page comic by yours truly

[Violetta]

Well, here it is. It took way too long to get done, but a lot of things kept delaying it. Enough excuses. Marvel at my first attempt at a comic.

I got the idea while I was driving around bored out of my mind in Kansas one day. Me and my roommates were just sorta exploring through the small towns out there. If you guys like it, I'll probably try to do more in the future. In the meantime, I hope you all enjoy it. n_n

 

[Violetta]

And pages 6-9. Comments and critiques are welcome. But be gentle. I'm still learning. n_n;;

 

[Boba11]

Very nice.

 

[the_jimmy_james]

The fruits of much labor! Looks great! 🙂

Thanks for the cameo at the end!!

 

[LonelyKimiko]

Fantastic 😀 . I especialyl love the face at the very end XD .

 

[44blues1]

SWEEEEEEEET! Looks like a naughty little girl got just what she deserves!

 

[Umojar]

Well, no wonder you got caught! That license was obviously fake. There were only scribbles on it! XP

But seriously, I like how it turned out. It transitions from each panel very well. Nice job. Hope to see more from ya.

 

[TKLVR181]

Girl, for the last two weeks you've been trashmouthin yourself about your art and you turn THAT out?? You've got some serious talent issues...you can't recognize it😛 Awesome stuff, I think the second to the last page could have been a pic all in itself!!:super_hap

 

[Invader GIR]

Naughty Sammi, getting caught in a speed trap. See what happens when you speed, you get taken in by redneck sherrifs and tortured all night.

Still, pretty nice. I really enoyed it, keep up the good work Sammi.

 

[Violetta]

Boba, I'm glad you liked it.

Jim, no probs. n_n You seemed like a logical choice for the first person I'd see.

Kimi, I thought the last panel was cute, too. Thanks. 😀

Blues, I'm good at being naughty. 😛

Umojar, that's only a bit less readable than some of the licenses I've seen. 😉 Thanks for the kind words, too.

Karen, I'm always hard on myself. You know that. 😛 But at least I'll admit my art is improving.

GIR, why do you think I drive fast? n_n;; And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 

[Abadon XXX1]

Indeed sammi, this is a very nice and extremely cute comic that you did ^.^

 

[blackmagicjack1]

Cute and naughty, very nice.

PS. I like the art too.

 

[Low_Roads]

Bravo! A new comic talent is born! A smashing success... by all means, let's have more and more and more! What a fun story, with well designed, well motivated, expressive characters and plenty of amusing by-play! A very cute O. Henry twist at the end, too! Very well written, very well drawn... your take on the world is light-hearted, perceptive and quite entertaining! Might we hope for a multi-part adventure at some point? Those always delight me the most (though the short-story format certainly offers its own distinct charms!)

 

[Timewarp]

Alright...but what kinda chord does this strike? ummm....i don't know.

I'd give it 6 s'alrights out of 5.

 

[BigNorm]

*stands up and gives a round of applause and whistles*

that's was awesome! great job! and i love the cute face at the end 😀

much work went into that, and i can tell. very well done!

 

[Janus4385]

Very nice, very nice indeed kid... I really like the story, it's quite entertaining. The art is not bad, you have a well defined style, a cute one too.
Just one small thing, IMHO, maybe you should use a stronger division between panels...

Keep up the good work and thank for posting!!!

P.S. I'm no expert or anything of the sort, but if you ever need any help, I'm at your service 😉 (just not with coloring, you're better than me at that 😀 )

 

[labrat78]

Yes, good indeed. I hope there are many , many, more of these to come.

 

[Senshi1]

Marvel at my first attempt at a comic.

*groan* Good one. >_<

And awesome work! 😀 It kind of reminds me of the beginning of "First Blood" ("Rambo" to those that haven't seen it). And the "run more speed traps" ending made me literally LOL. You're doing more after this, right? 😀

 

[Plague Doctor]

told you already 😉 but will say it again great pics 😉

 

[Alarik1]

bravo

yay. nice comic. maybe next comic u do, have her stockings ripped open and have her poor fet tortured by dogs and puppies. maybe like a dog pound scene for us all.

 

[rajee]

Awesome! Excellent job Sammi-Chan! 😎

 

[Snail Shell]

That's, what? 20 replies in like 12 hours? And you said it wasn't going to be any good. 😉

Looks great Sammi!

Snail Shell

 

[Phoenixfeathers]

*nodsnods* Very nice ^v^ I'm not sure about the "run more speed traps thing" ....but agian I wonder if they like bird feet XD

 

[Excess]

:laughing: Of course, I should have known. You can certainly draw Sammi, and you have a rather somewhat unique style. And it made me ROFL because, well you know. 😛

 

[Budweiserbob!]

O.O

*worships the ground sammi-chan walks on*

THAT WAS AMAZING! 😀😀😀

...

*re-reads what he just typed and realises how over the top it was.*

I mean...good work. 🙂