Job Problems (m/f)

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Thinking in a new chapter I made this.

The adventures (or misadventures) of the Tickler Raven got to a bothering situation for his work.

Tell me what you think and I hope you like it.

 

[Relent<]

Quite a twist, and a bit disturbing;
We need licenses now? 0_0

 

[Low_Roads]

The Tickler Raven got beaten to his target! These stories have very nice structure; I admire the way they're that self-contained (this one leading to an amusing punch-line) yet progressive, each segment building on the last. As always, the artwork is delightfully eye-catching! The first-panel street shot, with its suggestion of early evening, is quite atmospheric! All of the scenes are beautifully angled, an approach which adds much visual interest! TR and Yuri (first time we've heard her name, I believe) are shaping up to be most endearing characters, filled with personality and blessed with a novel purpose! Their next mission can't come soon enough!

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Relent: Well it's part of the plot but don't worry, this had been only the Raven's anger seeing his target being tickled by another.

Littlebighead: I'm glad the characters and the history are making good impressions, I am making little chapters that can lead to another point.

 

[Wii]

Sounds like you got a good story coming along here, and with charming characters to boot. A tickler license? That's a new one to me. xD

Can't wait to see what happens next up in this little kooky adventure of yours. xP

 

[Darth Vegeta]

Interesting i'm ashamed to say i only remember the previous piccie.

And your Raven is cool. Love the way you draw him.

 

[Cbarton]

I guess I'll need to become a Registered Vellicationist (R.Ve) as well as an RPh...

 

[His Divine Shadow]

How'd they get up to that window? 😛 I can see the Raven; he has wings, but Yuri? I second the LBH on developing personality; elements like Senor Raven's sweatdrop in panel two and shocked eyes in the last do make growth. The 'ler looks like a Super Saiyan with that hair but only a DBZ fan would find that amusing. Hence I find it amusing. 😛

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Tickler21: I see the tickler license has made a little surprise. It'll will come clear with the plot.

Darth Vegeta: Don't be ashamed, I'm new at the forum and there are a lot of artists here, it's normal that this can happen.

kyhawkeye: What do you mean with registered vellicationist? Anyway I hope you like the chapter.

HisDivineShadow: I must admit I didn't thought in Super Saiyan drawing the last panel, it might been my unconscious because I saw a lot the DBZ series. Respect to reach the window I'll ask Yuri. :super_hap

Thanks for the comments.

 

[Wii]

Tickler21: I see the tickler license has made a little surprise. It'll will come clear with the plot.

Heheh, can't wait to see what happens then. x3

 

[P[a]pi]

Nice playful pic. That's always fun.

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Papi: Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Medioloco2: Thank you too.

 

[limbo123]

interesting i liked the first, gave the second a thums up but like some say 'what a twist' romance? i like this give new thought for a fourth, no?

 

[Reaper_666]

i want a license 🙂 how do u get 1 😛

 

[Featherdemon]

Excellent installment! 😀

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

limbo123: I'm glad you like them. I hadn't got free time lately, but I'm working in the fourth chapter. Stay here to see it.

Matthew: That's a good question :laughing: don't worry we'll know later in the history.

Feathers: Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it.