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Mind Fuck.

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Concept original, awesome.

Domination vs. acceptance. Getting what you want when you want it.

Of course now I'm sitting here wondering how far the protagonist will accept the antagonist's offer. It would be no fun with out challenge and conflict.
 
Hot damn! :firedevil THIS. WAS. AMAZING. I got hit with such a wave of chills throughout this story.

I've always been a fan of "chance encounter" stories and this was artfully done. Part of me wants to say I second several others here in saying MOAR please...but I also LOVE that you let the reader imagine the rest. I am interested to see where you might take it though, when a chance encounter becomes something much more. Would it still be for just that night? Or is there a possibility it could grow beyond it?

Also, if you do write a sequel...might you answer the question how did he know her kink for tickling? Might be an interesting reveal to explore. 🙂
 
I finally gave this a perusal this morning, which is odd given that this is rather short.

I think pure headspace wise, you write an erotic piece that shows a certain mindset overpowered and, to a certain extent, forced to smolder in an intense environment. I think the actual tickling action and manipulation of, well, 'you', was actual quite hot, as was the breaking down to the driving need for release.

This is a hot little piece.
 
Totally hot! I love the rawness and honesty of your writing, the natural language you use. I worked at a bookstore for 5 years and I wish anything that awesome would've happened to me😀. Great story!
 
wow that was so good!!!... wow
Have you ever considered becoming a full time writer??? .. you are very very god at it!!
 
really enjoyed your story - i must be going to the wrong kind of bookstore. what's the address? 🙂
 
I actually started the second part of this and then stopped. I just re-read this and am seriously considering pulling it together again.

The bump was mucho appreciated, Marquis. :bubbleheart:

And I'll never be a full time writer unless Marquis becomes my full time editor. LOL

Thank you all for the kind words. It really means a lot. Sometimes it's embarrassing to post such personal things. It feels like I'm allowing too much of my own fantasy to be public.
 
D'aw.

Spankies. 🙂

I may return to this. -- It's been awhile, though. So we'll see. 😉
 
I had almost forgotten about this one...it was as good a read the second time.
 
Ka-Ching!

Well done CrystalLight. I love stories like this that take place in quiet (suppose to be anyway) places.
 
And of course. This one. This is my favorite. This brings out the fire in me. This one humbles me more than you'll probably ever know, Jo.
 
Crystal, that was one of my two favorite stories from you. This post caused me to read it again and confirm what I already thought.
 
Hey CL,

For some reason or another your story popped into my head today at random, so I thought it was time to reread, and the scenario was even hotter the second time around. 😉 Loved the composition...*SO* much! <3
 
I think the time has come to finally reveal the fact that the deep blue eyed stranger in the bookstore was actually... ME!!! :blaugh:
It was a long while ago now but rarely a day goes by that I don't think about the fun we had... and what happened after... well, all I can say is WOW!!! I think it's high time you shared THAT with the forum!

Okay, seriously... thank you for writing such a jaw droppingly wonderful story. Why have I been on the site all these years without coming across it sooner???!!!
 
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