Yeah, I think you need it to be a bit more descriptive. Even if you live in a town where most people wont pay attention to the idea, it still needs to sound inviting and not like a weirdo lol.
Something like:-
Hi my name is ______ and am interesting in exploring the idea of tickling. I am _____years old and am well built, tanned, and 6 "5. I would like to meet others, preferably women, of the same age, who would like to have a few tickling sessions. If you're interested, get back to me at______
Thats just an example. 🙂