Not quite playful (f/f, nudity, non-con)

[Betchass1]

I apologize for the depraved themes here... I've had a g/f so I've been off the tk drawings for a while. She's overseas for a few weeks, I get weird.
I wonder, how would you rate these, 1-10?

 

[footamateur]

if you would make the girls less chubby i would say 7 1/2 🙂

 

[Low_Roads]

Good nudes! I don't note any special depravity. The girls don't seem particularly chubby to me, either... they're nicely rounded, as females ought to be. I give the art a solid 8 and I voted "yes" in the poll, though I shy from buying e-comix or anything else online.

 

[EWeezy2001]

I also enjoy the girls' size. I enjoy a woman I can hold on to.

 

[highwing]

If the things were in color, I'd buy the e-comic. But the art is awesome none the less.

 

[BigNorm]

if things were in color and if there was plenty of foot tickling maybe.

 

[Kalamos]

Tough question man.
I like the linework, but I need ink to survive.

😉

 

[meangry1]

like the style though.

 

[Betchass1]

Cool, thanks for all the feedback. I should have been more explicit, I definitely intended to imply someone would ink over them; I only said "penciled like this" because I myself don't have the patience to ink or color. What I should have said was "penciled like this and inked by someone who knows what they're doing."
Thanks again.

 

[blackmagicjack1]

if you would make the girls less chubby i would say 7 1/2 🙂

Actually there's a word to describe gals with a body type like that, it's called voluptous. Good stuff, keep it coming 😎

 

[Kalamos]

I definitely intended to imply someone would ink over them; I only said "penciled like this" because I myself don't have the patience to ink or color.

Still, a tough question.
I think they could sell even without ink, but I wouldn't sell them "raw".
Then again, what do I know? 🙂

 

[LonelyKimiko]

I really like the pictures 😀 . I do think ink and colour is kind of essential. If you like, I could give at shot at inking and colouring one of them for you. Just let me know if you'de like me to try it out 🙂 .

 

[F.L. Atlanta 10]

great pics, but i think color makes a comic.

 

[oceanhead]

if you would make the girls less chubby i would say 7 1/2 🙂

lies and lies.

more big ladies please.

 

[Kalamos]

great pics, but i think color makes a comic.

That's a *good* point.

...

Oh, and I like them as they are.
A bare modicum of flesh is required to have fun. 😉

 

[footamateur]

seems that i'm the only one taht doesn't like big girls, chubby or voluptous LOL 😀

Anyway the work is pretty good, considering only teh artistic side and teh ability; keep up with this style because maybe can be your winning move 😉

 

[Kalamos]

seems that i'm the only one taht doesn't like big girls, chubby or voluptous LOL 😀

Ain't ya happy? More skinnies for you. 😉

 

[footamateur]

yuppy! 😀 *look around to see where a the skinny ticklish adn available to bein tickled and realize that they doesn't exist*

 

[ShadowTklr]

I have a couple of comments. First, these are not even remotely depraved. lol

Seriously though, it doesn't appear that you are comfortable drawing feet - or hands for that matter. I could be wrong, and since I can't draw a conclusion without an art teacher, I have no idea how difficult this is.

Secondly, I LOVE the taunting from the dominant characters, but wish I could see some expressive laughter from the ticklee.

I voted Yes, as I lolve your art style. The characters are robust and sexy. Keep up the great work!

 

[nstklr]

The idea is not depraved at all.

I like your style of line art too.

Like was siad earlier, there is never enough taunting in comics to suit me. I luv the choice she gives her victim too. I have always had, in the past, an idea of telling a ticklish victim she has to choose one of 2 places I will tickle. She hates to be tickled in either place, but she 'will' have to decide herself, and has exactly one minute to do so. If she can't, I will tickle both places. I can see that happening in these sketches you show us here.

8 t0 9 outta 10 here for me. Great work!

 

[dragon_fire517]

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Very good drawings. However, I prefer with drawings that they show some good bondage positions that you might otherwise have a hard time posing a model to do. And I agree there has to be feet and a good pained/laughing expression to show the torment.

 

[SlaverTickler]

Whats wrong with a little chubby anyways. Maybe it's my Norwigen blood, but I think a woman should have a little meat to her. Mined you I don't mined a tone body either, but thats different then being so skinny I can see through her.

 

[Betchass1]

Actually there's a word to describe gals with a body type like that, it's called voluptous. Good stuff, keep it coming 😎

I admit one thing they're not is "realistic". I have phases where I draw more realistically and phases where I tend to emphasize some of the special things...
I did not think of any of these women as chubby when I drew them; I was focused on softness and curves and, in one case, innocence.
A large part of guys' fascination with certain things is that those things "represent" the differences between the sexes. Boobs, hips, lips, butts. When I'm not going for a faithful reproduction, I guess those things tend to swell a bit. As I mentioned before, the g/f is overseas...

 

[Betchass1]

seems that i'm the only one taht doesn't like big girls, chubby or voluptous LOL 😀

Anyway the work is pretty good, considering only teh artistic side and teh ability; keep up with this style because maybe can be your winning move 😉

Thanks. Funny, if you asked me, I wouldn't say that I was particularly attracted to big women, I guess I just have a different definition. I don't mind certain womanly regions "sticking in my face".

 

[TKLVR181]

Thanks. Funny, if you asked me, I wouldn't say that I was particularly attracted to big women, I guess I just have a different definition. I don't mind certain womanly regions "sticking in my face".

"I like big butts and I cannot lie, you otha brothas can't deny..."

Oh. Sorry. Song moment. :laughing: