Poor Ticklish Duo

[ticklephehe]

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[tommytikl]

Hey ticklehehe, This is actually a very god story however the way you segregated the story layout makes it sort of tough to tell what's going on sometimes.

Consider creating some more paragraph/ sentence breaks to show change of perspective.
Very good story, you just need an editor! 🙂

 

[ticklephehe]

I Shall ...thanks

 

[joe_t_74]

really good story mane! 🙂

 

[love feet]

very good!

 

[ticklephehe]

thank you all

 

[Mandrake]

I liked it. The debooting was especially a nice touch.

 

[ticklephehe]

thank you Sir Mandrake

 

[ticklephehe]

thanks wodan

 

[flash112]

nice story...keep it up

 

[flash112]

differerent...but I really liked it.😈

 

[Ravis60]

nice story....you need to continue this one! there has to be a part 2

 

[ticklephehe]

thank you Ravis....we'll see

 

[minimouse]

wow...very talented, I got a bit confused at times tho but Im sure you'll work out the kinks

 

[ticklephehe]

I glad you enjoyed it...thanks

 

[flash112]

of course we enjoyed it....now get to writing!!

 

[Huth]

cool stuff 😉