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The Agencies: Issue Twelve tickle comic production preview

Oblesklk

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We're still in production with this issue, but looking to wrap things up fairly soon. I'm not going to commit to a release date, because every time I think we're almost done, something comes up. But we're getting there!

As with our other issues, I wanted to share what we've been doing all these months, and give a couple of teaser pics to those that have been following the series.

The biggest needed areas of improvement, after issue 11 released, was the artwork in my opinion. It was a matter of us communicating to the art team how to get this to look right, and keep doing revisions until it was done right. That's what we got after your emails and postings here, and it's something that has improved in issue 12. The anatomy isn't as awkward in this issue. The laughing expressions have improved in #12, and we'll just keep working on them with every issue. The Veronica sequence in #11 didn't turn out like I wanted, so I wanted to avoid that again.

Dave2112 was a huge help in putting this issue together. I drafted the script, let him know the gist of what we're looking to do, and he's been a great inspiration in arriving at the final product.

I don't want to give away too much about the specifics of this issue, but I don't know that it's going to be a surprise to anyone.

The biggest story here is the different approach I'm taking with this issue. After writing the initial draft of the script, I went back and realized there was way too much going on for an 11 page book. Something had to get trimmed down, and there was nothing I wanted to cut.

So after talking with Dave about it to get his thoughts, I decided to break this particular story up into two parts. So issues 12 and 13 will be covering the same topic, but from a different point of view.

So what's that mean?

For those that have been following along since Issue 7, you may recall that the twins Yin and Yang absolutely hate, hate, hate Agent Succubus. She was supposed to be a prisoner of their crime lord boss, but Succubus (with her seductive powers) turned him into a spineless wimp in no time flat. This didn't sit right with the twins at all. And every time they attempted to get even with Succubus, she would just use her powers to protect herself from any harm.

So the twins concocted this plan (see Issue 11) to get Succubus to willingingly submit to them, in exchange for her friend's safety. And it worked! So issues 12 and 13 will be all about "The Deal with the Devil, Parts 1 and 2"

Here, I wanted to show the dichotomy in the twins' personalities. They are similar in some ways, but they approach tickling in two very different ways. Yin's special powers are her abilities to control ice. She's been labeled as the Ice Queen, and with good reason. She derives no pleasure at all from tickling. She uses it purely as a method of torture to her "playthings." She is cruel and full of malice towards the world as a whole. It is with Yin that we begin this story.

Yang, on the other hand, views tickling much different. She controls fire, and her personality is warm and sensual. She is much more into teasing, into eroticism, into personal enjoyment of the laughter with her captives. That will be explored in issue 13.

So with that in mind, here's some preview pics from production.



Here's a picture of Succubus after she realizes Yin's true horrific plan with her. This is a look at the initial sketches, the intermediate inking stage, then the final colors/lettering.
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I gotta thank Dave2112 for this one. I told him the basic idea of the pinup and what I wanted to do, he really helped me out with the wording on this. It's Succubus showing a little bit of flair and attitude towards her most dangerous weapons. This is a before/after shot with the inks, then coloring.
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This panel made me smile a bit. I don't want to go into too much of what's going on here, I'll just say it's tea time for the twins as they enjoy the live show.
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Hopefully this issue will release soon. We're also working on some other projects concurrently, so we don't have these "two releases a year" thing going on. More on those projects later as they materialize. Ruthless #2 is in production, but has stalled horribly, as I'm sure you're well aware. It's now four months overdue, but we're still working on it. One page at a time 🙂 I was happy with how that story ended up, so anxious to release that issue, as well.
 
Oh, and while I understand about the twins, and your story approach for 12 & 13, I do have a question...

Will Succubus be enjoying her tickles? If *any* of the Agencies babes would be a candidate to love being tickled, and climax from it, Succubus would seem to be the logical choice (to me at least).
 
great production and all. but the last one, took so long to come out. it really put me off the series, have not gotten one since like 9-8. just my opinion. might catch up. sometime down the road
 
It all looks great so far :wub:

Oh, and while I understand about the twins, and your story approach for 12 & 13, I do have a question...

Will Succubus be enjoying her tickles? If *any* of the Agencies babes would be a candidate to love being tickled, and climax from it, Succubus would seem to be the logical choice (to me at least).

I can tell you that you may want to skip #12 😉

#12 will be all about Yin, and it will be all about submission, suffering, and dominance of a long time enemy.

#13 will be much more to your liking, and while I don't want to give away any specific plot points, your assessment of Succubus above is spot on.

great production and all. but the last one, took so long to come out. it really put me off the series, have not gotten one since like 9-8. just my opinion. might catch up. sometime down the road

That's fair enough. I'm trying to find ways to speed up production, but since I'm not the one doing the artwork, I'm limited in my ability to put them out faster.

It would be cool to wait until a few come out, then catch up in one fell swoop. I hope,when you do read them, that you find them enjoyable.

Such....giant....breasts!!:yowzer:

Yes, yes they are.
 
I can tell you that you may want to skip #12 😉

#12 will be all about Yin, and it will be all about submission, suffering, and dominance of a long time enemy.

#13 will be much more to your liking, and while I don't want to give away any specific plot points, your assessment of Succubus above is spot on.

I'll be getting #12 irregardless; I have the rest since the new start, so I need it as well for the collection. But I do *very much hope* that #13 won't be so delayed... 🙄
 
My one request is that you pay more attention to the facial expressions of the lee this time, please!
I've been a fairly faithful customer of your guys, but in Agencies 11, most of the expressions of the lee's did not match what was happening at all. There were panels where the lee is BEGGING for them to stop... but looks like she is just smiling for a photo. If it weren't for the speech bubbles, one would not even be able to guess that the girl was being tickled!
I'm not trying to be insulting, I'm just saying that I was honestly disappointed in my purchase that time, (especially since I purchased it after reading the phenomenal "The Ruthless"), and I hope this issue pays more attention to this.
 
I can tell you that you may want to skip #12 😉

#12 will be all about Yin, and it will be all about submission, suffering, and dominance of a long time enemy.

#13 will be much more to your liking, and while I don't want to give away any specific plot points, your assessment of Succubus above is spot on.

Well, I've given this some thought, and I think you may have missed my point. Which in turn would affect your storyline, as i see it. My reasoning is this:

If Succubus genuinely and fully gets off on being tickled, loves being tickled and orgasms from it, then she'll alwayswant it (and you confirm this by saying my insight was spot-on). So it stands to reason that no matter whois doing the tickling, or their reasons for tickling her (such as Yin the bitch looking for revenge) the end result is the same: Succubus enjoyingherself, and wanting more. This in fact has the added benefit for her of screwing over her nemesis Yin - Yin wants to hurt her, but it backfires because Succubus in fact enjoys it.

So unless the comic warps and becomes about genuine, sadistic, hateful torture such as knives, beatings, branding irons and twisted s**t like that, tickling Succubus for cruelty's sake shouldn't logically work. If the "victim" loves being tickled, then she can't truly be tortured by tickling.
 
Well, I've given this some thought, and I think you may have missed my point. Which in turn would affect your storyline, as i see it. My reasoning is this:

If Succubus genuinely and fully gets off on being tickled, loves being tickled and orgasms from it, then she'll alwayswant it (and you confirm this by saying my insight was spot-on). So it stands to reason that no matter whois doing the tickling, or their reasons for tickling her (such as Yin the bitch looking for revenge) the end result is the same: Succubus enjoyingherself, and wanting more. This in fact has the added benefit for her of screwing over her nemesis Yin - Yin wants to hurt her, but it backfires because Succubus in fact enjoys it.

So unless the comic warps and becomes about genuine, sadistic, hateful torture such as knives, beatings, branding irons and twisted s**t like that, tickling Succubus for cruelty's sake shouldn't logically work. If the "victim" loves being tickled, then she can't truly be tortured by tickling.

Even pleasure, if prolonged, can be torture. Part of a tickle torture story, and something i agree with. If i cum, it's great. If i cum ten times back to back, i have a feeling it won't be as enjoyable. Just because somethng is enjoyable in one way,doesn't mean that it's enjoyable everyway.
 
Well, I've given this some thought, and I think you may have missed my point. Which in turn would affect your storyline, as i see it. My reasoning is this:

If Succubus genuinely and fully gets off on being tickled, loves being tickled and orgasms from it, then she'll alwayswant it (and you confirm this by saying my insight was spot-on). So it stands to reason that no matter whois doing the tickling, or their reasons for tickling her (such as Yin the bitch looking for revenge) the end result is the same: Succubus enjoyingherself, and wanting more. This in fact has the added benefit for her of screwing over her nemesis Yin - Yin wants to hurt her, but it backfires because Succubus in fact enjoys it.

So unless the comic warps and becomes about genuine, sadistic, hateful torture such as knives, beatings, branding irons and twisted s**t like that, tickling Succubus for cruelty's sake shouldn't logically work. If the "victim" loves being tickled, then she can't truly be tortured by tickling.

You're becoming more and more unbearable with each and every demand you seem to be making. You are forcing an issue, constantly begging and demanding that your special needs be catered to. We get it. You want to see Succubus orgasm and orgasm and orgasm while being tickled. However, the logistics as you place them are unrealistic and, as such, extremely fringe. I like orgasming in my tickling comics and clips as well. But having her absolutely love it and demand it and this and that...that isn't your place. These are someone else's characters...and if they adhere to a different construct than you believe is true..then create your own characters and comic series.
 
You're becoming more and more unbearable with each and every demand you seem to be making. You are forcing an issue, constantly begging and demanding that your special needs be catered to. We get it.

I am not "demanding." I was simply trying to explain my ideas about Succubus. I had stopped commenting for a long time on this forum because whenever I expressed my view beyond saying something short, generic, and positive, I was attacked for it. A few people told me in private notes not to drop out, and I finally decided to come back. And once again, the moment I express my view, I'm attacked.

This simply reinforces my original opinion that I should've just stayed quiet.
 
I am not "demanding." I was simply trying to explain my ideas about Succubus. I had stopped commenting for a long time on this forum because whenever I expressed my view beyond saying something short, generic, and positive, I was attacked for it. A few people told me in private notes not to drop out, and I finally decided to come back. And once again, the moment I express my view, I'm attacked.

This simply reinforces my original opinion that I should've just stayed quiet.

After looking over your past responses, i disagree with the notion that you were attacked whenever you have been critical of something. I have however seen people who disagree with you and the people who's artwork you've criticised responding though, which only makes sense as they are defending their own investments.

I do feel that Meangry was a bit harsh in his post, but in all fairness he does have a bit of a point. One of the things you have been critical about is that you don't feel that the fetish in the comics is being potrayed in a way you enjoy. And you know, that in and of itself is cool. That is, until you continue to make the same critism again and again. This is when it can be precieved as "harping".

Critisism can be a good, helpful tool, but part if that is what and how you are being critical.
 
This panel made me smile a bit. I don't want to go into too much of what's going on here, I'll just say it's tea time for the twins as they enjoy the live show.
Agency12_03.jpg

Hmmm, after my post, I took a closer look at this. This is an example of my concern. I'm aware that its a rough and can be changed, and that I don't know exactly what's going on here, BUT it looks to me in this image that the girl is being tickled in stocks by those cats, yet has a rather stoic facial expression.
 
My one request is that you pay more attention to the facial expressions of the lee this time, please!
I've been a fairly faithful customer of your guys, but in Agencies 11, most of the expressions of the lee's did not match what was happening at all. There were panels where the lee is BEGGING for them to stop... but looks like she is just smiling for a photo. If it weren't for the speech bubbles, one would not even be able to guess that the girl was being tickled!
I'm not trying to be insulting, I'm just saying that I was honestly disappointed in my purchase that time, (especially since I purchased it after reading the phenomenal "The Ruthless"), and I hope this issue pays more attention to this.

Yes, we are working on that. Issue #12 is all but finished now (with some tweaks yet to be done here and there), and I can say it is an improvement over Issue #11. Is it perfect? Nah, it's not, but the series is a work in progress.

The panel you specifically ID'd was revised since I posted it, for the very reason you mentioned. And honestly, that's why production took so long this time. So it's better...and hopefully it will be good enough. If not, we need to keep working on it (unless everyone gives up on the series 🙂 )

Funny you mentioned Ruthless, production for that book has also restarted, thank God. Long story, but extenuating circumstances forced the studio's rep to abandon work for a bit to get his personal life tended to. So we're back on track, even though it's extremely late.

Well, I've given this some thought, and I think you may have missed my point. Which in turn would affect your storyline, as i see it. My reasoning is this:

If Succubus genuinely and fully gets off on being tickled, loves being tickled and orgasms from it, then she'll alwayswant it (and you confirm this by saying my insight was spot-on). So it stands to reason that no matter whois doing the tickling, or their reasons for tickling her (such as Yin the bitch looking for revenge) the end result is the same: Succubus enjoyingherself, and wanting more. This in fact has the added benefit for her of screwing over her nemesis Yin - Yin wants to hurt her, but it backfires because Succubus in fact enjoys it.

So unless the comic warps and becomes about genuine, sadistic, hateful torture such as knives, beatings, branding irons and twisted s**t like that, tickling Succubus for cruelty's sake shouldn't logically work. If the "victim" loves being tickled, then she can't truly be tortured by tickling.

I don't agree with this at all, so it's definitely an area we just won't see eye to eye.

I enjoy being tickled...on occasion. I love being tickled by my wife. We take turns and I love it for every reason every ticklee ever gave for enjoyment our shared passion. Likewise, she enjoys being tickled by me. But not all the time. And not by a stranger.

On that thought, if a guy off the street decided it would be fun to kidnap me and tickle me, I probably would not enjoy it. At all, actually. Even though I love being tickled, there are times and places for it.

For me, it's entirely about context. I have no doubt, since this interest is broad in scope, that some people with exhibitionist tendencies and a love for tickling would love to be tickled under either scenario listed below. However, I am not one of those people, and neither is this character.

That's why I wanted to explore this dichotomy among the twins, and Succubus's reaction to it. I think it's an interesting topic. If Succubus enjoys tickling no matter what, no matter the context, that becomes a somewhat flimsy, one dimensional character in my opinion. Just a prop. And don't get me wrong, sometimes props are great in a tickle comic context. I've used them myself on several occasions. But not this time, I just like some of these characters too much.


Critisism can be a good, helpful tool, but part if that is what and how you are being critical.

Emphasis for this point. I do respect your collective passions for the artwork in this community, and just want to see it always be presented in a respectful manner, whomever we're addressing. That doesn't mean everything is cheery sunshine, roses, and fluffy bunnies happy. It just means respectful.

I will be honest that some criticisms are easier to digest/implement than others. I feel the feedback on #11 was great. We had a new artist change, and there were serious issues with the manner in which the characters reacted to everything in the story. That's a huge problem for a fetish that is psychologically 100% reliant on reaction. So I had a very long series of talks with the artist, and I think it really sunk in towards the end when we were doing the revisions in earnest. Hopefully there is a noticable improvment this time around. I believe the improvement is there. As far as content, I'm more reluctant to address those concerns. I understand that there are tens of thousands of users on these forums, and thus logically there are tens of thousands of ways in which tickling is viewed here. To encompass every desire is folly; I try to spread around the content as best I can, according to how it makes sense to the story and the characters. There will be certain themes in our various products, and I want to maintain that integrity. The Agencies will have more of a feel of a mainstream comic, in that there won't be nudity and blatant sexual activity in every issue. There will be some, but it will be the exception, not the norm. That's just not how I want to present the story and the characters. The Ruthless will be much more sexually charged. And I have no doubt that, over time, the Ruthless will enjoy many more sales than The Agencies because of that fact. And that's fine with me 🙂 I love variety, and hopefully you guys can appreciate what we're trying to do on some level. And speaking of variety, we have two new series that are in the works, but I'm keeping very mum on those until they become more tangible. The themes for those will also be varied from what we present today.

Hope this helped.
 
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Yes, we are working on that. Issue #12 is all but finished now (with some tweaks yet to be done here and there), and I can say it is an improvement over Issue #11. Is it perfect? Nah, it's not, but the series is a work in progress.

The panel you specifically ID'd was revised since I posted it, for the very reason you mentioned. And honestly, that's why production took so long this time. So it's better...and hopefully it will be good enough. If not, we need to keep working on it (unless everyone gives up on the series 🙂 )

Funny you mentioned Ruthless, production for that book has also restarted, thank God. Long story, but extenuating circumstances forced the studio's rep to abandon work for a bit to get his personal life tended to. So we're back on track, even though it's extremely late.

Wow, I am now about ten times more excited for your two next upcoming products! Woohoo!
 
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