Improving my storys ???

[SlaverTickler]

I was wondering (aside from grammer problems) how could I improve my work. I'm always trying to evolve my stuff so any advice would be great.

 

[AffectionateDan]

Well, you nailed one of the biggest target areas already...

...you already mentioned half of it. Check spelling and grammar. Write it up the way you want it, proof-read it for errors, and use the spell-checker.

As for the meat of your stories, you write some pretty hot stuff. Now, don't take this the wrong way, but have you considered a slower build up to the naughty parts? Or leaving the more graphic details out altogether, and leaving it to the reader to fill in with their imagination, better yet? Sometimes, "Less is more". I've only got a few stories posted, myself, so obviously my input as a writer is a little biased. Have you read many of the stories in here? There are some EXCELLENT writers posted here... try reading some of the works of--

terorizer
BOFH666
laughter_n_love
Ayla ny
MaxSpeer
Morning Angel
TQLR

These are some of my favorites, and their styles are all unique, save for the common element that they all kick ass. Do a little homework... they're all outstanding examples of storytelling. You won't be sorry you read them!

 

[isabeau]

read Shadowtklr and Invisible Ink, they are among my all time favorites. and they lead up slowly to the tickling, especially Ink..although SlaverTickler, i think your stories are pretty good as they are.. I mean after all, you do have your own archive..

 

[Strider]

OK, maybe this is just my idiotic idea of what good writing is, but what about something where the tickling is secondary to the plot and character development? Like, it's there, and it punctuates the story often enough, but it's not in and of itself the only driver of the story. Does that make any sense?

 

[AffectionateDan]

OK, maybe this is just my idiotic idea of what good writing is, but what about something where the tickling is secondary to the plot and character development? Like, it's there, and it punctuates the story often enough, but it's not in and of itself the only driver of the story. Does that make any sense?

Hell yes it makes sense. It's a hallmark of good writing. Makes it feel real, so the reader can identify with the characters.

 

[lk70]

Hell yes it makes sense. It's a hallmark of good writing. Makes it feel real, so the reader can identify with the characters.

I just read a certain story that took place in a shower...ring a bell, Danimal?

Damn man.

 

[SlaverTickler]

I get most of it...

I understand the part about the build up, but making the tickling secoundary... whats up with that. This is a Tickle Fetish site, so the tickling (I think) should be in the fore front. I do use spell chek on my Word Processor. My biggest sin, I guess, is that I don't proof read. Thats why you'll see I instead of I'd, or an instead of and in differentspots.

 

[AffectionateDan]

I just read a certain story that took place in a shower...ring a bell, Danimal?

Damn man.

😀 Thanks! They say, "write what ya know"... 😉

 

[lk70]

I understand the part about the build up, but making the tickling secoundary... whats up with that. This is a Tickle Fetish site, so the tickling (I think) should be in the fore front. I do use spell chek on my Word Processor. My biggest sin, I guess, is that I don't proof read. Thats why you'll see I instead of I'd, or an instead of and in differentspots.

For me, I don't think tickling should be secondary exactly, but I appreciate some story around it. On the other hand, there are some very long stories that have a lot of plot and background and info and unless they're riveting stories anyway, I tend to jump to the "good parts" as it were.

Typos and misspellings really do ruin it though.

 

[Deadsea7777]

OK, maybe this is just my idiotic idea of what good writing is, but what about something where the tickling is secondary to the plot and character development? Like, it's there, and it punctuates the story often enough, but it's not in and of itself the only driver of the story. Does that make any sense?

I think if you can do it, it does, essentially because gives something to which the tickling complements. You can take a shortcut and use a movie or a real life public knowledge situation and use it as a frame to go quick into tickling.

 

[steph]

I think you deserve a lot of credit for even asking this question--takes a lot of guts to ask for help. And yep, I may be a little biased because you've featured me in a couple of your stories... 😛

XOXO

 

[tickledorange]

I understand this. My stories need a ton of improvement too, but I have no idea how to accelerate the process, other than "keep writing them". I think sometimes it's a hit and miss on this forum, too, where sometimes a story will do great, but an hour later, a story with the same dynamic won't do as well, partially to what people are interested in at that second. Besides, your stories are great, a lot of stories are, it just takes a lot of time to do it on each one. I mean, we must be doing something right, we have our own archives on the site.