Desek's Tease (nudity */f)

[stiltz]

it's taken a while to work on this. hopefully if i do more, i'll get quicker with them and improve the quality. this is the first half of desek's adventure. i'll be putting the finishing touches on the second half and should have it by next weekend.
peace!

 

[stiltz]

...continued...

 

[stiltz]

...and last part of first half of this story. haven't done any art for a long time, and this is my first attempt at an e-comic, so i hope all you fine fellas and lasses enjoy!

 

[TicklishGrl4Lfe]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I can't wait for Part 2!!!!

 

[The Bandito]

Wow O_____________o

I LOVE this comic! I love the nudity, and the format, and the upperbody tickling, and Desek's cute attitude.

This was a very very fun read, and I CAN'T WAIT for part two.

You've got some serious potential, dude! And also some great talent.

In terms of constructive input - the only thing I see that you could change that would immediately improve the style is to give desek fewer lines in her body. All this is purely subjective, but I feel like fewer lines in the body (including the face) make the body look younger, softer, and give a more professional feel. Try a pic with Desek where she only has a few carefully placed lines inside her body and I think you'll see an improvement in her "appeal".

Just my two cents buddy - this is a really enjoyable comic. Please make more, and definitely be proud of it!

Best,

Bandito

 

[tommy12]

I loved the preview pick you had up a little bit ago, and now I'm flat out craving for more after this! Great work!

 

[SlaverTickler]

In a word... MORE!

 

[stiltz]

Thank you all so much!

And Bandito, I've been admiring (drooling over) your work for some time. Any input from you is truly valued! I've already finished most of the artwork on the second half, but if/when I work on some more of these I'll definitely utilize your advice. I've always had issues of too many lines (especially in the face). Really pissed off one of my art teachers when she asked us to draw her...and don't even ask about when I drew my ex-wife... 🙁

Part two is coming sooooon!!!

 

[TickleMantis]

The suspense!

Very nice indeed. I'm definetly in the majority because I'm looking foward to part two with great anticipation!

 

[milagros317]

A fine comic, please post part two as soon as it's done. 😀

 

[stiltz]

Thanks to everyone for the awesome comments!

Part two now posted on new thread!

 

[Tarzan]

Very nicely done. Looking forward to seeing if Desek gets what's coming to her!

 

[Ayla ny]

Wow... yup... uh huh... ummm... not bad... (lordy lordy lordy) I read these out of order but... wow!

 

[funkydunk]

almost similar to a real life experience I had where me and my friend had a girl on our laps, his girl and my girl, and we were just talking random stuff, while we pulled their panties down, and tickled our girl's asshole as much as we could, and the contest was to see who could get our girl to laugh louder, the one who could would be the winner that night.

 

[MacD]

I open an almost 7 year old thread just to read that bull***t??